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Wild Violets

wild violets bloom touched by cold rain and warm sun under nude oak trees migrating northern flicker pecking at violet’s roots
Inspired by: Andrea Dietrich Contest:Tanka 2 Written: March 18, 2015 Northern Flickers are in the species of Woodpeckers but they peck in the ground. They are migratory and come through here in the spring.. A group of them is called a guttering, menorah or Peterson..
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Kerr Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 12:24 AM
Congratulations to you, Sara, on your success with this marvellous Tanka. Vivid descriptions are much in evidence. Imaginitve weather contrasts allied to tree and creature aspects🔥🔥⭐ H
Kendrick Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 5:06 AM
I am delighted that you found it to have vivid descriptions, Howard. Your visit with an uplifting review was inspiring. 👍⭐Sara K.
Callus Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 10:33 AM
I love this Tanka dressed in lovely imagery, Sara! Deserves a top rating! Congrats on your merited win. // paul
Kiser Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Congrat's! You've presented some great imagery here.
Haight Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win for your Tanka! Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 1:56 PM
SARA, Congratulations on your awesome TANKA 2 win Always & Forever <3 Luv ~LINDA~
Ebbs Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 12:34 PM
Very Nice Sara, congrats :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 9:29 PM
This was a lovely description of the bird and the violets. Love the line about the nude oak trees! Congrats in my contest.
La France Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Sara, a perfect 7, so beautifully written, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, I write . . .
Onclaud Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 6:18 AM
nature at its best through your shining pen, sara.. best winning wishes!.. huggs
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 11:07 PM
A lovely tanka and picture with stunning imagery, Sara! Hugs, Rhonda
A   Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 10:40 PM
This is a precious poem Sara, outstanding imagery. I love woodpeckers. We had an oak tree, and it brought a few of these nears.. HUGS... PD
Culverhouse Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 9:07 PM
Good one mom. cute photo I have been seeing them here too.
Shaw Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Hi Sara, this is such a sweet, interesting Tanka. I really enjoyed it! Hugs, Kimberly
Pinet Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 12:57 PM
It flows well and holds your interest from start to finish. Emile.
Allison Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 9:52 AM
wonderful image and imagery Sara good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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