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WILD GEESE

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I walked through the woods this morning, nary an animal crossing my path. The only sounds I heard were birds chirping, small animals collecting nuts, and my feet as they gently landed on autumn’s leaves and the decaying pine straws. I rounded the bend and paused just in time to witness the sun’s gradual ascent into the enormous Texas sky. I closed my eyes and stood perfectly still letting the silence envelop me. In the distance I heard them, geese honking. The blue air above me was filled with a skein of wild geese flying in V-formation. They glided together effortlessly through the sky, homeward bound for the season. I stood in awe watching them noticing the geese had a pride about them, as if they were aware of their own magnificence.
fall equinox brings skein of geese flying above interrupts silence wild geese, sunlit sky V-formation heading south seasonal journey boldly unimpressed by opinions, fears, and doubts geese trust the Knowing
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Gauthier Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 9:26 PM
Nice way to capture such awe inspiring moments that take our breath away ~ well done
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 4:44 PM
many thanks for your positive comments today
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 2:39 AM
- A beautiful sight to see in the sky, Sara ... but, also a little sad - :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 4:44 PM
I agree, Anne-Lise...hope you have a delightful weekend as well, hugs, Sara
Hind Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 1:04 PM
I really enjoyed this Haibun, though this form isn't usually my favorite one. A fav from me!!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 4:48 PM
oh wow, thank you! I used to write more Haibuns but don't as much anymore. Glad you liked this one...humbly grateful for the fave, hugs, Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 12:20 PM
What a creative/lovely write you have here. Great Picture. Love Both... This is the time of year you see them.... Have a blessed day writing away...............
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 4:48 PM
I appreciate your visit, Paul, and your positive words...sending you autumn blessings, Sara
George Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 8:47 AM
Beautiful haibun, dear Sara. The flying geese in V formation is a sign of the arrival of winter, creating a magnificent sight.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 4:47 PM
thank you, Valsa, for visiting and for your positive comments....yes, seasons here are slowly changing hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 6:36 AM
Love the final verse and the imagery of Autumn and geese. I saw geese yesterday, a sure sign of the coming seasons. Hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 4:47 PM
thanks, Kim, for your kind words....yes, seasons are slowly changing.
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