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Wild Flowers- Kittens and Butterflies

 
One sunny day, we went to see wild flowers, We followed mother because we were just kittens; It was so beautiful, we forgot the hours, We were playful kittens with feet like mittens. We followed mother because we were just kittens, The field was full of wild flowers- pretty; We were playful kittens with feet like mittens, Out from the tangled growth would pop a kitty. The field was full of wild flowers- pretty; Fluttering- came a group of blue butterflies; Out from the tangled growth would pop a kitty, Happiness - flowers, butterflies and blue skies. Fluttering- came a group of blue butterflies, Sweet, grew pink and blue flowers and purple weeds; Happiness- flowers, butterflies and blue skies, Us, kittens chased those butterflies at great speeds. Sweet, grew pink and blue flowers and purple weeds, It was so beautiful, we forgot about hours; Us, kittens chased those butterflies at great speeds, One sunny day, we went to see wild flowers. ________________________ February 17, 2016 Poetry/Pantoum/Personification/Wild Flowers- Kittens and Butterflies Copyright Protected, ID 16-758-573-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Personification Pantoum, Kittens and Butterflies, sponsor, Eve Roper First Place
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March 20, 2016 at 11:56 PM
Broken, CONGRATS on your awesome "Kitten & Butterfly win." Love Linda
La France Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Linda, thanks for the congrats and the awesome and love !
Hicks Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 10:09 PM
I could see you penning a great one for your two cuddly, cuddly kittens. I enjoyed the chase, BW. Congrats on the win!
La France Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Timothy, thanks for the nice comment and the congrats !
Tagore Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Wonderful! ... Hugs, Bobby
La France Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Bobby, thanks for the wonderful and the hugs !
Inman Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 9:48 PM
Re-visited to say wonderful BW.
La France Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 9:50 PM
James, thanks for the wonderful !
Raven Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. So gentle and beautiful are the words that you place before us in this excellent write. What joy and peace your words do give this reader. A dream that sings into the heart Constance. This is so deserving of a seven rating and it goes into my faves....MIKE.
La France Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 9:19 PM
Mike, thanks for visiting with the nice comment, the excellent, the 7 and the fav !
Kendrick Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 5:56 PM
Congrats !!! ( ( ( ) ) ) Sara
La France Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Sara, thanks for visiting with the congrats !
Allison Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 4:15 PM
this is absolutely delightful Constance :-) :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting and the nice comment and congrats !
Scars Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Broken Wings, a lovely poem, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
La France Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 9:37 PM
Laura, thanks for visiting my poem with the lovely and the congrats !
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 3:46 PM
Constance, thank you for introducing me to a new form that I truly have been enjoying. Thank you for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT :) Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 9:44 PM
Eve, thanks for loving my poem, I am over the moon happy with my placement !
Martin Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Sweet and beautiful are your words in this delightful, difficult form!
La France Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Thomas, thanks for visiting with the sweet, beautiful and delightful, I have many of these Pantoums lately !
Inman Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:23 AM
I have not tried a Pantoum, BW. Don't know if I'm up to it. Yours is beautiful.
La France Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:46 PM
James, it is not that bad, just of it as putting a puzzle together...
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