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Wild Birds Poetry Contest

He soars above the heat, High above, sun’s right hand man, Watching the mewling amateurs underneath. His sight instills fear, Though too high to steal a glance, Where he navigates, his war cries they hear. His vision recognises, In a staggering second he dives, Rejoining the chasm of sky and sea divided. Contest - Wild Birds Poetry Contest Bird - Peregrine Falcon Additional note*- I am not a premium member and therefore I am unable to use the poet’s notes to write all of this. Thank you.

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Date: 12/8/2023 5:34:00 PM
I have donated 1YR premium membership to you please enjoy it hugs Shadow
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Date: 11/28/2023 7:50:00 PM
Falcons belonging to the eagle family soar too high and can dive down like darts. They always amaze us with their predatory skills. A beautiful entry for the contest, Kaveesha. Thanks for your comment in my poem.
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 11/29/2023 1:42:00 AM
Thanks for the comment!
Date: 11/25/2023 3:06:00 PM
Love the imagery you have projected here Kaveesha. "...Sun's right hand man..." great line! Congratulations! :)
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 11/26/2023 4:45:00 AM
Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!
Date: 11/24/2023 9:10:00 PM
nicely expressed in its brevity -
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 11/26/2023 4:45:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 11/23/2023 4:38:00 PM
well done on placing in my contest Kaveesha with an enchanting poem of the falcon hugs Shadow
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/24/2023 3:50:00 AM
glad you are happy and welcome to Soup we are a friendly bunch hugs Shadow
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 11/24/2023 1:00:00 AM
I’m so glad you liked it. Thank you so much!

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