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Written: November 04, 2023, For Shadow Hamilton Contest. ________________________________________ Isolated from people, wild and untamed, A joyful setting for nature's music, famed. Let the feral birds fly, their plumes aglow, Bops are bewitching, as a blissful bow. Wild birds live gracefully in woodland, They innately dance over the vast expand. As they gently fly in the light, the wings shine, Akin to echoes in the wind, tunes are divine. These feral birds watch over this wild land, Their existence reflects nature's vast strands. They avow unclear tales with them as they fly, Ancient stories and arcane enigmas in the sky. Wings imply freedom, flight, and wild might, This pulse is an honor to the wild, a comely sight. Birds flutter freely in the forest, a view rare, Magical songs invite us to join them if we dare.

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Date: 11/25/2023 3:47:00 PM
Back with congratulations Las! :)
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Date: 11/23/2023 5:10:00 PM
congrts Sotto for placing with your lovely poem of birds and their freedom hugs Shadow
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Date: 11/7/2023 3:47:00 PM
Lovely tale of nature's feral birds Las. Your picture draws me in to their world of magical flight. :)
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Date: 11/7/2023 4:09:00 AM
Beautifully rhyming poem on the denizens of the sky, who have made the forests and woodlands their dear home. Their cooing, babbling and twitter make the forest trek a pleasure. They are never hampered in cages. They live, fly, rest, breed and enjoy within cool shade of the forest. It is a pleasure reading this poem and imagining the delight these lovely birds give us. Enjoyed the wonderful flow and visual effect this poem has given me. All the best in the contest dear friend. Btw.... I have been away on a tour. After coming back, I am down with fever right now.
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Date: 11/5/2023 8:29:00 AM
I see you have a love of nature as I do. I enjoy the birds that I can see from my kitchen window. Right at this minute I need to clean out and refill my birdfeeders so that they can come into my space and enjoy some fresh food. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 11/5/2023 4:33:00 AM
dearest Sotto--this poem was a delight to read this morning. I truly enjoy seeing all the feral birds that live in the wooded area near our home. They're simply breathtaking, so graceful and symbolic of the freedom I desire. Your words flowed effortlessly like the wild birds evoking light and dance in my soul. I particularly liked the last two lines '...magical songs invite us to join them, IF we dare.' I dare! Will fav this exquisite creation. Enjoy your Sunday, Sara
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Date: 11/5/2023 3:59:00 AM
They rejoice their freedom in the wild. Your poem speaks to the joy they convey as they soar above. Nicely done, my friend.
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Date: 11/5/2023 1:49:00 AM
Dear Sotto, this is a stunning write! Made me think! What a brilliant and beautiful poem about wildbirds, i love the way this flows and the way you’ve used internal rhymes and rhymes and imagery so descriptive and divine! I especially love the lines “ As they gently fly in the light, the wings shine“ what a sight! “ Ancient stories and arcane enigmas in the sky.” So deep! Your way with expressing and painting sceneries with words is so very artistic and captivating! Goodluck for the contest
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Date: 11/4/2023 10:54:00 PM
Nicely done, Lasaad. I enjoyed reading my friend. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe have a nice weekend.
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