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Placed 7th in Shadow Hamilton's Wild Bird Contest, November 23, 2023

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Wild Birds

A woman on her daily walk was serenaded by
a cardinal, a blue jay, and a Carolina wren—
or so she thought. Imagine how surprised she would have been
to learn it was I, a mockingbird perched on a limb up high.

I can make you think you hear a car horn or an alarm,
a barking dog, or a piano. Year-round, day or night,
I perform many charming songs, to listeners’ delight,
but I’ll attack if I think man or creature means me harm.

I am wildly popular, along with being versatile.
I am the designated state bird in five Southern states.*
Those living in the area know that in the forest waits
a concert by performers that are sure to make them smile. 

*Arkansas, Florida, Mississippi, Tennessee, and Texas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Nicholsen Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 5:58 AM
lovely write enjoyed reading your poem.
Fowler Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 3:07 PM
Back with big congratulations Janice! :)
Hamilton Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 4:42 PM
congrts on placing with your mocking bird poem a joy to read hugs Shadow
Canerdy Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 7:19 PM
Shadow, thank you so much for sponsoring and for my placement! Janice
Fowler Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 3:39 PM
Yes ma'am Janice. My State Bird and what fun he is! So close, but just enough "off" you know it is he who sings. Cuteness! :)
Canerdy Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 7:10 PM
Thanks, Alice! Janice
Elliott Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 4:34 PM
Hi Janice, aptly melodious rhyme bird personification poem. Mockingbirds are very protective of their nests. I worked at a Sizzler restaurant in Raleigh, NC. I was walking under a maple tree to head into the restaurant when a mockingbird started dive-bombing me pecking at my arms. I walked under a branch it had its nest on. I was quite relieved to make a hasty retreat into my workplace, lol! Your poem is quite charming, my very best wishes for the contest. ~
Canerdy Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 4:59 PM
Thanks so much, Regina. Yes, they can be vicious little critters! Janice
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