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We had some a few years ago that made a nest right above where our garage door opens. They are so protective of the young. We tried to see them using a ladder to peek at the nest, and they did that dive bombing thing. It's so cool how they swoop around and close to you. they did not return the next year but this year they came back! (using a new nest area)

Barn Swallow | Missouri Department of ConservationBarn Swallow - eBird

I am the common barn swallow. How popular am I. Just like you, I can do a lot when I’m in the air. I eat, drink, mate and even sleep while I fly! My mate and I mate for life; we do things as a pair. The males sing to us females and sometimes we sing back, I chose my mate for his long tail; that’s the better catch. A protective instinct our males surely do not lack. My guy goes crazy if you get too close to eggs I hatch! My husband finds the place for us to make our nest. Not just in barns. On structures made by people we like too. Please don’t perturb our nests. Old ones we like best, for then a lot of time for building we don’t have to do. I am sure a pretty bird. The upper part of me is shiny blue; my belly’s orange,and forked is my tail. Don’t touch our nests; I’ll dive bomb you. I love my life so free careening, swooping, sweeping the sky as if on wind I sail.

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Date: 11/15/2023 2:17:00 PM
I love all the info you have woven into your story about the swallow, They really are a pretty bird and always return. I love things and people that return.
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Date: 11/10/2023 12:33:00 PM
Ah, what a splendid personification, Andrea! Alas, the barn swallows, a species unfamiliar to myself, but thanks to your delightfu words I got some insight through your verses. Blessings
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Date: 11/9/2023 11:50:00 PM
This is so cute and insightful too about their nature and what they are like you’ve described very well: iv been thinking of doing this prompt , but not sure. Love yours you always write in a very soul warming manner. Goodluck for the contest
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Date: 11/9/2023 2:54:00 PM
My favorite bird is the male Red Cardinal Andrea! Ironically, the Male Cardinal cares for the babies...i wuz the single parent twice(full term). Thanx for the knowledge dear poet, wow!...much love, james
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Date: 11/9/2023 1:52:00 PM
a delightful personification, Andrea! I'm not familiar with barn swallows. After reading your poem, I can certain envision them and their particular bird lifestyle. Nicely done, Sara
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Date: 11/9/2023 1:34:00 PM
A wonderful/cute bird story/write. Good Luck... Have a great fall day writing away............
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Date: 11/9/2023 1:29:00 PM
beautifully written with so much information incorporated in a most delightful way, andrea!
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Date: 11/9/2023 10:10:00 AM
I enjoyed this very educational poem, Andrea. I love birds of all kinds so rthis is right down my alley. Great to see you again. Happy Thanksgiving:)
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