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I met George one spring day as he cruised by, so sexy he was a dreamy dream on a big motorcycle and I was so young and at a lovely fanciful age, a butterfly we spent our days riding the country roads our nights under the stars in parks and beaches, kissing I could not bring him home to my parents he was wild, untamed and a free-spirit soaring on wings and oh, so romantic George was my blue sky and I was so in love one day he said to me, lets go to Florida we will leave for Daytona Beach today I was thinking of mother and father not approving, hesitating but the idea of the open road was appealing I emptied my bank account that day packed some stuff in a old backpack and better judgement was left behind in our dust as we stormed away oh, it was wonderful with the wind in our faces and the blue sky above our black leather jackets flapping in the wind in tune with the soaring roar we stopped in small towns along the way slept in cheap motels at night oh, it was romantic we arrived at Daytona Beach and spent two weeks nothing fancy like restaurants or shopping just an amazing vacation I have never, ever forgotten I often think of George and what he is doing, now ________________________________ April 12, 2015 Poetry/Free Verse/wild and untamed Copyright Protected, ID 04-662-570-12 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France For the Premier contest, Memorable Vacation, sponsor Shadow Hamilton, Judged 05/2015 Second Place

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Date: 5/9/2015 7:41:00 PM
That is sweet Broken, he seems to be a dream boat that still floats above you. Love the poem. Congratulations with your "Memorable Vacation win" Love LINDA
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:51:00 PM
Broken, congratulations in Shadow's contest. Forever SKAT
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Date: 5/8/2015 8:32:00 PM
Such a romantic adventure, and how well you shared your memories with us through your lovely Narrative. Congratulations on your nice win, BW! Hugs, Sanddra
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Date: 5/8/2015 6:16:00 PM
Oh I do love this romantic write sounds a remarkable holiday - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/8/2015 6:06:00 PM
Congratulate on your wonderful win a 7 Blessings & hugs :~) Eve
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Date: 5/8/2015 6:00:00 PM
love bikes and wild men lol Connie good on you for having the courage to go with him congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 4/20/2015 8:45:00 PM
Wild and free -- I felt the wind in my hair and I felt like giving a whooping yell into the night! Loved it. 7 Have you read Ghost Story by Peter Straub -- just finished it -- very good!!
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Date: 4/15/2015 4:52:00 PM
Memories and longings of past cherished relationships and times of youth. They always make for inspiring poetry and you did just that with this gem.. A7 and what a great memory you stirred in me of a fantastic time back in my youth.. Thanks.. By the way have owned 6 motorcycles myself when younger.
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Date: 4/12/2015 10:36:00 AM
Superb. A great vacation. Written from the heart. #7
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