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01/11/25

Rhyming scheme :  abcdefghij  jihgfedcba

A Jan,2025 Posted

Fifth Place

Contest by Brian Strand

Night is wild. Dear sweetheart ! Passion oozing Bubbling blood in flood. Come close closer closest. Embrace tight ! Feel my heart throb. Agrestal yet natural urge surging, drifting, gushing in efflux. Honour my ardent ardour, let's be wild. Strong feelings in fervent fervour, not mild. Wild Full Moon might : I am just Moonstruck. I'm confident, you will indulge. Dear ! My amour, you have robbed. Your love is my asset. Now vision blurred Senses losing ... Restless lust to yield. Right !

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Date: 1/17/2025 3:35:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest with this wonderfully crafted Etheree poem, Anisha. I thoroughly enjoyed it
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Date: 1/11/2025 8:24:00 AM
Dear Anisha, your poem's imagery captures the intensity of a wild passion felt for one's "sweetheart". Your last line is awesome, and indeed, passionate! Good luck in Edward's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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