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Under the dust of time Drifts a wandering loner Meandering through life forlorn Devoid of peace or purpose Under the dust of sorrow Lies a hurt barely beating heart Ravaged by the tides of fate Shred by the claws of misfortune Under the dust of despair She longs for a ray of hope To dare pierce through darkness Of survival’s meaningless charade Deep in her pocket one last token Thrown into the wishing well ~ AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on March 27, 2021 for contest THE LAST TOKEN sponsored by MYSTIC ROSE ROSE

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Date: 3/30/2021 3:46:00 AM
This is powerful! "Shred by the claws of misfortune" Wow!
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Date: 3/30/2021 6:02:00 AM
Thanks, Caren ~
Date: 3/29/2021 8:41:00 PM
Wonderful, but sorrowful a great contender <3
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Date: 3/30/2021 6:02:00 AM
thanks, Eve ~ much appreciated
Date: 3/28/2021 2:10:00 PM
oh my, this is so emotive and beautifully written. I will be shocked if it's not on the winners' list.
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Date: 3/28/2021 10:19:00 PM
Thank for your vote of confidence, Andrea ~ much appreciated
Date: 3/27/2021 8:39:00 PM
The sadness and despair of grief are expressed so well here, but there is always hope for tomorrow. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 3/28/2021 7:07:00 AM
thank you, Evelyn ~
Date: 3/27/2021 12:00:00 PM
Yet, she'll still survive and hopefully see better moments.
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Date: 3/28/2021 7:07:00 AM
thank you, ML ~

Book: Shattered Sighs