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Wide Awake

Clattering coins 
forcefully flung 
inside a fragmented glass jar,

doleful howls full of misery, woe
nocturnal creatures arise,

rapid rotations, 
continual tornados

tedious echos beneath 
a derelict railway tunnel,

nefarious lightning 
strikes the thunder,

rolling immensely enraged
she roars fighter jets in fury,

disturbed bees, swarming their hive
stalking, terrorising, pestering

a solo stone plunges
down a bottomless well,

belligerent twangs
upon a jilted ukulele,

these were her hunger pangs,
which fed her insomnia at night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations on your win,Joanna, love your imagery and the feeling in your poem. Hugs Eve
Chamberlain Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Thank you fir your lovely comment. :-) x
Rose  Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 5:38 PM
I've enjoyed reading your poem this evening Joanna,
Chamberlain Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 1:33 AM
Thank you :-)
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