Why You, Why Me

this man, that man, thee man
my father stood salient before my eyes
and like Louis over Schmeling or Ali over Liston
without cheer from onlookers 
who bet everything on the challenger
the cool, cool silence of anger was deafening

still, I knew love when it shined
and on this day love melted past the horizon
leaving me to wonder in sullenness–why
the participants whom I thought were just like me
in love with everything, in hate with nothing–froze
as if this were the end

this woman, that woman, thee woman
my mother lies on the floor
legs askew, arms likewise
her gaze blank, her mouth ajar
crimson flowing free from her being
and like Schmeling under Louis
or Liston under Ali she lay
victory a mere misnomer

this man, that man, thee man
I stand before my son’s eyes
and like Louis over Schmeling
or Ali over Liston I hover–my wife
the mirror image
of my mother
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Godwin Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 2:20 AM
Oh, my, hard hitting punches for all, emotionally and otherwise, including the reader. I can't believe I haven't visited you in a while, wasn't intentional. I wander around Soup w/o a plan because that's always proved pointless, glad you commented on something of mine, thus reminding me of the poetry thrills I find here. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Evans Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 3:23 PM
Thank you CayCay. It never ceases to amaze me how writing a damn poem can trigger something like this in me..................peace!
Situation Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 7:38 PM
Don't know how to accept this one. but it has a pattern.
Evans Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 6:09 AM
Thank you!
Rose  Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 4:26 AM
wow this is potent to say the least
Evans Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Hey Rose. I might have put too much salt on the eggs with this one. Thanks for stopping by.............peace!
Brown  Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 9:56 PM
Wow this poem is very deep! I really enjoy reading this.
Evans Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 10:13 PM
Thank you so much Riquetta. Poetry has taught me the importance of being earnest. God bless...............peace!
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 8:24 PM
This was profound, and painful, but very well expressed. You do have a way with words my friend.
Evans Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 10:05 PM
Thanks Barb. The slogan no pain, no gain comes to mind. Thanks again.....................peace!
Situation Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 7:26 PM
I go through some poetry and some just don't have a clue. But you you know how to write. Personal, Historical pauses in the right places. I think I'll try another.
Evans Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 7:36 PM
Thank you. Be safe, be blessed.
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 1:05 PM
wow, if this is what i think it means. OUCH!!!
Evans Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 4:08 PM
Thanks Andrea. Ouch is a fair assessment.
Poet Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 10:04 AM
Rick, your writing is simply remarkable. It transcends mere words and reaches into the depths of the soul, stirring emotions that are both raw and profound. I am deeply grateful for your kind words on my page.
Evans Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 11:21 AM
Thank you my friend. This poem was a challenge to write to say the least.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 9:13 AM
Woah, collecting myself to write a comment. First of all, your writing is incredible. Secondly, beyond evocative, visceral, I felt this right in my gut. Woah, and wow.
Evans Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Thanks Maureen. This poem hurts in more ways than one.
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