Why You, Why Me

this man, that man, thee man
my father stood salient before my eyes
and like Louis over Schmeling or Ali over Liston
without cheer from onlookers 
who bet everything on the challenger
the cool, cool silence of anger was deafening

still, I knew love when it shined
and on this day love melted past the horizon
leaving me to wonder in sullenness–why
the participants whom I thought were just like me
in love with everything, in hate with nothing–froze
as if this were the end

this woman, that woman, thee woman
my mother lies on the floor
legs askew, arms likewise
her gaze blank, her mouth ajar
crimson flowing free from her being
and like Schmeling under Louis
or Liston under Ali she lay
victory a mere misnomer

this man, that man, thee man
I stand before my son’s eyes
and like Louis over Schmeling
or Ali over Liston I hover–my wife
the mirror image
of my mother

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Date: 9/5/2025 2:20:00 AM
Oh, my, hard hitting punches for all, emotionally and otherwise, including the reader. I can't believe I haven't visited you in a while, wasn't intentional. I wander around Soup w/o a plan because that's always proved pointless, glad you commented on something of mine, thus reminding me of the poetry thrills I find here. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 8/9/2023 7:38:00 PM
Don't know how to accept this one. but it has a pattern.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 8/11/2023 6:09:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 7/1/2023 4:26:00 AM
wow this is potent to say the least
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Ricky Muse
Date: 7/1/2023 5:40:00 AM
Hey Rose. I might have put too much salt on the eggs with this one. Thanks for stopping by.............peace!
Date: 6/28/2023 9:56:00 PM
Wow this poem is very deep! I really enjoy reading this.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 6/28/2023 10:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Riquetta. Poetry has taught me the importance of being earnest. God bless...............peace!
Date: 6/28/2023 8:24:00 PM
This was profound, and painful, but very well expressed. You do have a way with words my friend.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 6/28/2023 10:05:00 PM
Thanks Barb. The slogan no pain, no gain comes to mind. Thanks again.....................peace!
Date: 6/27/2023 7:26:00 PM
I go through some poetry and some just don't have a clue. But you you know how to write. Personal, Historical pauses in the right places. I think I'll try another.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 6/27/2023 7:36:00 PM
Thank you. Be safe, be blessed.
Date: 6/20/2023 1:05:00 PM
wow, if this is what i think it means. OUCH!!!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 6/20/2023 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. Ouch is a fair assessment.
Date: 6/19/2023 10:04:00 AM
Rick, your writing is simply remarkable. It transcends mere words and reaches into the depths of the soul, stirring emotions that are both raw and profound. I am deeply grateful for your kind words on my page.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 6/19/2023 11:21:00 AM
Thank you my friend. This poem was a challenge to write to say the least.
Date: 6/19/2023 9:13:00 AM
Woah, collecting myself to write a comment. First of all, your writing is incredible. Secondly, beyond evocative, visceral, I felt this right in my gut. Woah, and wow.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 6/19/2023 9:54:00 AM
Thanks Maureen. This poem hurts in more ways than one.
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