Why the Shadow Departed

Have you ever stood still—
noticing the sudden absence
of what once followed you everywhere?

We think we know the reason.
We stitch guesses into tidy shapes,
as if they could fill the hollow
left behind.
But truth is slippery—
most times,
we can’t hold it at all.

We are meant to lift each other,
not pile stones in the way
of someone else’s climb.

So—
gentleness can outlast anger.
A patient tone
travels farther than a shout.
Carry a lamp in open palms,
not judgment clenched in fists.

This was never a wage to earn—
only a space to offer,
and a gift that cannot be traded.

Perhaps the shadow withdrew
because the burden bent its back,
or because it needed
quiet hands
to piece together what had shattered.

And maybe—just maybe—
it will return,
changed by distance,
tempered by the places it’s walked.

Some still whisper in dim corners,
but the one who stepped away?
They speak now
where the light is full and warm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 8/12/2025 8:29:00 PM
A FAV for this wonderful poem filled with wisdom and truth, my friend. I usually have something more to say about just about anything I hear or read; your poetic words in this poem, leave me speechless, Rowena. Bless you for bringing light and a gentle touch into poetry Soup. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/12/2025 11:20:00 PM
Bill, thank you kindly for your beautiful words. Smiles and blessings right back to you, my friend.
Date: 8/12/2025 5:04:00 PM
such depth and artistry to your words. I especially liked: Perhaps the shadow withdrew because the burden bent its back, or because it needed quiet hands to piece together what had shattered. Your poem is soft yet to the point. A striking read, loved it, Sara
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/12/2025 11:18:00 PM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 8/12/2025 5:57:00 AM
This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me that is if it is for a contest. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/12/2025 6:09:00 AM
Thanks, Sara! This poem wasn’t meant for a contest. It came from dealing with people who judge without really knowing someone. Instead of fighting back, I think writing is the best way to find some peace. Sometimes it’s better to stay quiet and let peace speak louder than all the noise around us. hugs...
Date: 8/12/2025 12:36:00 AM
- "We are meant to lift each other, not pile stones in the way of someone else’s climb." - Dear Rowena, these lines should be on the wall of Poetry Soup - "Light and warmth" is what we need here - A beautiful and uplifting poem, thank you :) - hugs
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/12/2025 5:32:00 AM
Thank you Anne!
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