Why the Rose Bled

Parents so proud four sons they raised From the Highlands of Scotland in the pre-war days On their crofts they worked morning till night Unknown to them then of a future fight The Germans have invaded a country so free Poland was taken, the world shaken visually Britain declares war as our men enlist To rid the enemy as the fighting shifts Europe's engulfed in a feverish war Many are dying to comprehend what for Four brothers sign up to fight Soon a mother will pray every night Campaigns they fight in, these theatres of war Witnessing horrors never seen before In their garden at home on the family crofts Lies a bed of roses with petals so soft Then one day with a passing glance A pink rose dripping red in deathly stance Their mother turns to the gate she looks Telegram in hand from the postman she took With trembling hands she opens with care Upon reading the message in tear laden stare Their eldest son in Africa was lost As many many others deaths global cost Every day as she passes the rose It's pink petals bloom her tomorrow's fear grows. .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/28/2014 10:00:00 AM
captivating my eyes to read more..:) tragic but a sweet one.. love your last paragraph..what a symbolism.. :)
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James Fraser
Date: 9/30/2014 2:17:00 PM
If my poems are captivating for you, then I must write more and captivate you even more James :) x
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James Fraser
Date: 9/28/2014 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Olive, and a big thank to the Rose. I so love writing about them, James ;-)
Date: 9/24/2014 5:17:00 PM
This beautiful an so touching, I had 2 sons go in the service at one time one in the Navy in Desert Storm he came back with traumatic brain injury and the other in the Airforce making bombs and I know how it is to pray and worry for the children that are far away. eve
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James Fraser
Date: 9/24/2014 5:26:00 PM
Thank you kindly Eve. Your boys are in my thoughts, always, James........
Date: 9/24/2014 4:06:00 PM
Ow James..This poem captivated my heart and misted my eyes.Sad and beautifully penned.
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James Fraser
Date: 9/24/2014 4:20:00 PM
Thank you kindly Charmaine. It's a repost of an older Poem that I thought needed taken down from the attic. It's also to give me an indication to finally decide if the Soup is where I should be, or find a site for my Dark, Fantasy poems, and purely concentrate on them, as I tend to enjoy writing them more than others. Thanks kindly for the visit, I'm smiling, James :)
Date: 9/24/2014 4:06:00 PM
To my fvs
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James Fraser
Date: 9/24/2014 4:39:00 PM
Thank you kindly Charmaine :)
Date: 9/24/2014 4:00:00 PM
very deep descriptive powerful emotional write James - got a tear in my eye here :-( Hugs Jan xxx
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James Fraser
Date: 9/24/2014 4:30:00 PM
When I write about Scotland, or include Scotland, it inspires me greater than normal. Also, Roses appear to do things to my mind, for stories I find, allowing readers to grind, James :) xxx
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