Why Stay

You talk to me like Im nothing 
you treat me like im nothing 
you act like what i have going on in life is pointless
so why do I stay 
yes it true I dont want to be alone 
but I know it have to get worse before it get better 
I know I have to go though some ups and down 
So why do I stay 
Yes I love you and  I am so in love with you 
Yes I take so much from you to go though this everyday
I try to get you to understand that I am a great women
I show you so much and give you more then I give myself
and you still see me as being nothing 
so why do I stay 
you say you going to change 
but a man never change 
I was told that many  times
but it funny because I never tryed to change you 
I just need you to see what you got 
what you have 
and what you did have
because like they say
you cant help someone who dont want to be help 
you cant change someone who dont want to be change 
and you cant fix an broken glass
but there is still a ? that  is not answer 
but I am the only one who can answer that ?
I guess i need to figure it out 
and make up my mind
but it need to be soon or later
Is he really worth me staying
or should  have I left a long time ago 
that the ?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 9/5/2012 10:53:00 PM
This can use some spelling and grammar refining, but you have a great foundation to build an admirable poem here.
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