Why Now?

On a summer night
leading me to my front door
you tell me you're leaving.
Not just leaving me,
but, from this Earth and your life.
Is this really happening?
No longer will you
hold me gently in your arms,
or kiss me on a hot night.
Why this news? Why now?
I have met my one and only.
I've lost my reason to breathe.
I will take this night
hold on to your warm arms
til you take your final breath.
(I chose 'Summer Evening" for my inspiration.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Iloduba Jnr Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 3:47 PM
luv this stuff, man!
Wilson Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 1:24 PM
love never end love well always be there in your heart he never left your heart he always be y your side
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October 23, 2009 at 1:49 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. The questions work well. Congratulations on your second place finish in Brian's contest. Way to Go! Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Imagine contest with this wonderful haiku. It's easy to see why you did so well. The painting was inspiring. Smiles, Dane Ann
Golden Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 8:44 PM
Congratulations on your success in Brian's contest, Brandee! Well done! Hugs, Donna
Sweetheart Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 7:07 PM
Bravo! Well written and congrats on your winning. Can relate very well to the message in your verse.
Gorelick Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 2:43 PM
Shee! A stunner! Congrats on your win. BG
Gass Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 11:19 AM
This is so moving and beautifully written, Brandee. Congratulations on your WIN in Brians contest! Love, Robin
Richards Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 8:49 AM
Great job ... congratulations on this winner! ~ Love, Carrie
Brown Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Brandee. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 1:25 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Brandee.Rgds Brian.My latest contest'Poet Laureate' is now open.
Freeman Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 5:43 PM
This is truly awesome, inspirational, creative, You're rocking. Sincerely, Moses
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 8:31 AM
I have read your amazing poetry today and enjoyed it. Thank you Brandee. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 12:46 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Brandee.Rgds Brian
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 12:47 PM
Interesting take on this one. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
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