Why Now?

On a summer night
leading me to my front door
you tell me you're leaving.
Not just leaving me,
but, from this Earth and your life.
Is this really happening?
No longer will you
hold me gently in your arms,
or kiss me on a hot night.
Why this news? Why now?
I have met my one and only.
I've lost my reason to breathe.
I will take this night
hold on to your warm arms
til you take your final breath.
(I chose 'Summer Evening" for my inspiration.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/16/2010 3:47:00 PM
luv this stuff, man!
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Date: 10/28/2009 1:24:00 PM
love never end love well always be there in your heart he never left your heart he always be y your side
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Date: 10/23/2009 1:49:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. The questions work well. Congratulations on your second place finish in Brian's contest. Way to Go! Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 10/23/2009 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Imagine contest with this wonderful haiku. It's easy to see why you did so well. The painting was inspiring. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/18/2009 8:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your success in Brian's contest, Brandee! Well done! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/18/2009 7:07:00 PM
Bravo! Well written and congrats on your winning. Can relate very well to the message in your verse.
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Date: 10/18/2009 2:43:00 PM
Shee! A stunner! Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 10/18/2009 11:19:00 AM
This is so moving and beautifully written, Brandee. Congratulations on your WIN in Brians contest! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/18/2009 8:49:00 AM
Great job ... congratulations on this winner! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/18/2009 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Brandee. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/18/2009 1:25:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Brandee.Rgds Brian.My latest contest'Poet Laureate' is now open.
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Date: 10/12/2009 5:43:00 PM
This is truly awesome, inspirational, creative, You're rocking. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/11/2009 8:31:00 AM
I have read your amazing poetry today and enjoyed it. Thank you Brandee. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2009 12:46:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Brandee.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/10/2009 12:47:00 PM
Interesting take on this one. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
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