Why I Should Win

I nailed this contest with a poem that has punctuation
for ease of read rather than confusing line implications.
I composed a free verse feeling rush that soars with
heart sentiment grounds that I tweaked until profound. 

Do check out my ew-la-la imagery, subtle flippancy, 
smooth flow that ideally rolls to tighter grab as it goes.
My write ignites awe to wiggly with words brilliantly 
alert, not unclear bit blurts, possibly boredom fraught.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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May Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 7:50 AM
Congrats on your win CayCay..
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 6:58 PM
Methinks you changed it. I am loving it!
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 6:39 PM
but now you gotta JUDGE yourself, sweetie. He asked us to judge the poem we write!! anyway, I love your cool ways that you expressed your feelings in these lines.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 9:30 PM
This is so hilarious to me, and so appropriate for the contest. Love it CayCay! ew-la-la imagery and "awe-wiggly" stand out especially and delight me.
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