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Why I Loved Carolyn Devonshire's Rain and Stardust

Carolyn's imagination could soar like no one I have ever read, bringing the reader along on a magical journey! I firmly conclude, she sits, even now, upon her White Stallion, visiting all the wonders she imagined, bestowing us all with her love, as she always signed off her comments with. **** ** ** ** ** ** ** Furious with Zeus, a vengeful Hera searched the world Until she discovered the most amazing young girl ~~A Native American with hair dark as the night Atop a white steed she traversed mountains snowy white~~ “Let there be stardust,” the Goddess proclaimed with force And the woman was stunned, soaring on a flying horse “Let there be rain,” Hera chose to give her power The girl rode above clouds, below her rain did shower Forever Rain on Stardust would travel through the sky With the powers of a Goddess as she rode on high To shower blessings of rain on villages so dry Rain sees the past and future, though she does not know why The outcome surely not as Hera had intended Zeus became enamored of Rain’s presence so splendid He kissed the sky beneath her with bright rainbow arches Today you still see them wherever Stardust marches A Goddess rides now, but sweet Rain was once just human And she remains bewildered by her own acumen Olympian rulers outdone by their creation For Rain and Stardust yet win human acclamation ~~%%%%%% _,_, ~~%%%%%% -"/./ ~~%%%%%-' / `. ~~%%%%%%' . ,__; ~~%%%%%%' : \O\ ~~%%%%%%' : `. ~~%%%%%%' `. _, ' ~~%%%%%%' .'`-._ `. ~~%%%%%%%' : `-. (,; ~~%%%%%%' : `._\_.' ~~%%%' Carolyn's poem submitted by James Marshall Goff

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Date: 9/21/2021 1:12:00 AM
Shape poems need extra imagination Jim,a further take on Carolyn's gifting
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/21/2021 8:21:00 AM
Very much so Brian, thanks for stopping by!
Date: 9/19/2021 9:55:00 AM
I see you must have removed a haiku you wrote back in 2010 and replaced it with Carolyn's poem here because ten years ago I was here seeing a haiku. haha! You know what? I really like what you chose. this picture Carolyn came up with at the end of her poem is stunning!! I don't think I could figure out how to make such an image. And what you said about her at the top of the poem was so sweet, James. Thanks for contributing.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/19/2021 8:58:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, my honor!
Date: 12/28/2010 2:24:00 PM
wow, really good! Kind of like haiku too. If you played with it a bit, I am sure it would equal some little one or two line Asian form! (since you wrote "do not know" for its form)
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Date: 12/11/2010 9:59:00 AM
danger, danger, Will Robinson! Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2010 11:53:00 AM
So much left unsaid. A great poem, James!
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Date: 12/2/2010 2:20:00 PM
Really fabulous, Jimbo! A definite fav..Wow! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/2/2010 11:43:00 AM
I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day James. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2010 9:34:00 AM
Very powerful image used,friend.Great write
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Date: 12/2/2010 9:33:00 AM
Excellent example of this image form.Jim.Check out my monthly image verse contests at my blog http://imageverse.blogspot.com regds Brian
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:13:00 AM
A super thought with wonderful images to search the buries past, Jimbo
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Date: 12/1/2010 7:04:00 PM
Love it! I hope you are not too late for the contest...Lay
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:37:00 PM
Hi Jimbo.Dont' know about the form-not familiar- but love the words and the whole idea of what you've written.-Deep-Sometimes unearthing and releasing can be painful and unpleasant especially if its' feelings.Also not always wise to go back.Best move on.You see, so many ways to go with this piece,great food for thought.Amazing in so few words.Glad to share my All....with you.My philosophy in life.Stood me in great stead many times.Thank you for showing your appreciation of it.Love June
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Date: 12/1/2010 5:42:00 PM
Good one..I hope that you find your past that had been buried and it is all good...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 12/1/2010 3:09:00 PM
I think I just missed out on Thvia's contest ...lol! oh well! I still dig my poem!!! jimbo
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Date: 12/1/2010 2:56:00 PM
Haven't seen Thvia's new contest yet, but Brian would be pleased by the depth you provided in this compelling "spaces" poem, Jimbo. Very nicely done, my friend. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn
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