Home » Poems » Emo Rawr Gurl » Why Can'T I Give Up

Why Can'T I Give Up

Death..... Tastes so sweet Wish I was there And not here I slit my wrists But I'm still here I'm still living I overdose But I only slept Went to slit my throat Only to drop the blade I'm still here With nowhere left to go He hits me She cusses me out They both say it's all my fault I should just give up I've tried It didn't work The tears I shed Are all too real I just want to rest In an eternal sleep Everyone would be better off If I wasn't here Everyone would be happy But.......... I'm too incompetent I can't do it right I'm sick of waking up everyday I can't take it much longer I'm such a screwup Why can't I just give up?

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Skat A

Date: 1/9/2014 7:25:00 AM

WOW! Caroline. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Emo Rawr Gurl
Date: 1/12/2014 9:41:00 PM

Thanks nice to meet you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2014 4:01:00 PM

it's not in you to give up, Caroline, ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Emo Rawr Gurl
Date: 1/12/2014 9:41:00 PM

Thanx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/8/2014 3:27:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup,Caroline ! - A touching poem. - Life on earth is a gift - Pleased to read your first poem. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)