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Why Aren't Men, Men?

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This poem appears in my book "Ripples"

How can a man awaken a women's love Then walk away leaving her chained to what was? How does a man make a covenant of love Then run away and hide? (Leaving emotional wreckage at the scene of the crime) Not owning up to the responsibilities Just wanting the pleasure and no more if you please Why can't a man be more circumspect of a women's needs? I am afraid and suspect that he has himself deceived It's the sociological garbage that he's been fed and believes (By the way where was Adam as Eve was being deceived?) A real man must be changed inside As the Saviour showed mankind how He rears His bride Keeping a watchful Eye from the sky To look after her every need To her heavy sighs give heed On the cross He did bleed......for her

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