Why Aren't Men, Men?
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This poem appears in my book "Ripples"
How can a man awaken a women's love
Then walk away leaving her chained to what was?
How does a man make a covenant of love
Then run away and hide?
(Leaving emotional wreckage at the scene of the crime)
Not owning up to the responsibilities
Just wanting the pleasure and no more if you please
Why can't a man be more circumspect of a women's needs?
I am afraid and suspect that he has himself deceived
It's the sociological garbage that he's been fed and believes
(By the way where was Adam as Eve was being deceived?)
A real man must be changed inside
As the Saviour showed mankind how He rears His bride
Keeping a watchful Eye from the sky
To look after her every need
To her heavy sighs give heed
On the cross He did bleed......for her
Copyright © Michael Ramel | Year Posted 2024
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