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This does not reflect anything to do with my work at the Dept of Ed, this is a fictional write commentating on the percieved growing industry of the Fifty Shades stuff.

She did it all, everything that I wanted, She went everywhere that I went, She did the things that I loved deep down, After handing me her consent, To do what I wanted, whenever I chose, To do whatever I said, On the road, in the park, on the seat of the court, And then out the back in the shed, And she obeyed all the things I demanded she do, No matter how strange or absurd, Like telling a story on the phone at work, Moaning each delicious small word. She did it all, every day when I wanted, She did it with all sorts of objects, And she did the things that I love deep down, Wearing nothing but shiny latex. I love that she did whatever I wanted, I love she obeyed every day, I loved being dom and she my small sub, When she did whatever I’d say.

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Date: 1/30/2018 12:42:00 AM
Just the right amount of colour. Well done, Lewis.
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Date: 2/6/2018 9:31:00 PM
thanks Line, yep, just enough colour for folks to shade in the rest :)

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