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Why? I ask myself that one question Every night before bed every morning just after Iwake up then as the thoughts pore out of my head I ask myself again Why did he leave? Why Did he fill my heart with hurt then left? Why Did he do nothing to change? And WHY Is the world we live in today Full of absent fathers? Fathers who said they wanted a baby Wanted some thing to love Said they would love them to the end of the earth Heh well guess you've reached the end Because your gone and you left all of that hurt and pain behind I asked myself if he was still here in my life would it be any better ? would all of the lies go away ? all of those things that never did he never did for me would they just be a distant nightmare? ha i wish I bet every child wishes the same wishes you would of stayed wishes you would of loved them ask themselves why wasn't he proud of what he created? why was he ashamed to go out in public after i was born? now that's just sick? and all you absent fathers out there im not trying to make you feel bad im simply just asking why?

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Date: 2/21/2015 9:53:00 PM
Hi Jan.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Poetry Soup is an awesome place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other gifted poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give one of the Contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more of your good writes in the days to come. Please take time to check me out, ok!
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Jan Saunders
Date: 2/27/2015 7:16:00 PM
ok thx
Date: 2/21/2015 12:15:00 AM
Hi Jan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/20/2015 10:07:00 PM
Jan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/20/2015 11:59:00 AM
A heartbreaking write Jan - I am sure many children would love answers to the same question :-( Hugs Jan xx
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