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In this unforgiving, barren land, I grow from roots that grip the parched and arid earth. Spared by a relentless sun, I am allowed to rise. Yet this pardon, I must question. I've asked for no such mercy to endure the howling wind, this heat, not merely surviving– but blooming. I fear a coming catch, a price unspoken, a toll unseen, against which I must guard. A shield of distrust surfaces, sharp, defensive spikes among the flowers that dare show color here. And I remain resilient, wary and wondering why.

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Date: 4/1/2025 12:50:00 PM
I love this...I can closely relate to your words...thank you for sharing with the world.
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Date: 11/27/2024 12:51:00 PM
I like this poem too. It has truth in it in honest self awareness. And I like the repeating cascades to express the fear of anticipation in the stanza, 'I fear a coming catch...' and the flower personification. It has real emotion. J :)
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Date: 11/25/2024 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations Jessica! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. You should be proud of your accomplishment. There were so many good poems submitted, yet your poem caught my eye. Well done, my friend Emile.
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 11/30/2024 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Emile! I'm honored! Xo
Date: 11/2/2024 8:54:00 PM
boldly stated, questioning (challenging) providence or universal design - an endearing existential expression either way
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Date: 11/1/2024 7:40:00 PM
Personification? It takes strength to survive harsh conditions.i enjoy your hopefulness
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Date: 11/1/2024 9:45:00 AM
Interesting. Sometimes we feel this way, wondering if there's a catch, what's around the corner
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