Why

Why is it that every time I try, I end up crying? Why do problems keep on piling? Why do broken pieces always pierce? Why is life so tough and fierce? Why are we not there yet? Why are there so many dates? Why can't I be confident? Why can I not comment why too many people are broken in the moment of love or pleasure? Why is it that I cannot really treasure what I have? Why is there love when there's hate? Why? Why are my feelings always on debate?

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Rachael Sanga

Date: 3/8/2021 8:56:00 PM

Every question has an answer but most of the times we refuse to accept those answer, and sometimes we ask questions we dont wanna hear its answer. Debate your thoughts, accept your feelings.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/27/2020 8:56:00 AM

I want you to know that your poem spoke to my heart. I wanted to give you a hug! I cannot answer your questions, but I encourage you to speak out about the concerns you have, and do not be afraid to seek answers.

Jones Muta
Date: 10/27/2020 10:34:00 AM

Thanks. Your words just made me feel better.