Whose Death?

By the snap crack clackings of my thumbs
Something wicked this way comes
In robes of finest silk did it dine
and found our flesh most divine

A creature who wore the cloth
In life did it spit upon the cross
To eat the flesh, and consume the blood
And many have drowned in it coming flood

Long, lean and sheik
It's gaze can make many a man meek
Teeth of bright white
Polished to hide the deeds of its night

Upon my house did it knock
Pray sanctuary with the blessed souls
Standing beneath our clock
Did it ask the toil for it's stroll

Clad in its finest Black cloth
Book in hand and cross over chest
Did it read the Lord's Prayer over our broth
Little did we know it was our last Prayer under our family Crest

It dined that night upon the flesh
It suped our blood while it was fresh
I watched my loved ones dies one by one
Wondering when it's deed would be done

Awashed in chilling foresight
That this will be the first night of many to come
It approaches me and picks me up as you would a doll
Then rests me on the table near it's bowl

Smiling down to me as if it was in delight
It shows it blood stained fang enhancing my fright
It pets my head tiding my hair
Speaking to me as if it offered me life, does it truly dare?

Good evening, young Hostest. 
One so full of life, should never be fearful of one such as myself
The table you set I must protest does not suit my palate so I took matters into hand
And as such I must offer more to you for going out of my way 
would you join me and my merry band?

Let me be a guide for your weakened heart
And show you the warm sweetness of your own blood
I shiver and shake, lost in the dark
Do I tread the mud filled waters of this demon who took all from this fool

Now in all the ends of days do I ask
Did I die that night,
Or is it you that died?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 5:52 PM
Witty arrangement, Sincerely Moses
Fraser Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 4:25 PM
Wow, Nara - this type of writing will be up Kristy and Aleera sisters alley - Illyiana will love it, i call her Wes after Wes Craven, kool write>>James
Burton Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 2:21 PM
Wow! surprised this poem doesn't have more comments. I really enjoyed it alot and also will have to read it again. Enjoy your night.
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 2:13 PM
Awesome writing Nara. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 12:19 PM
A little Dracula like. Interesting. Sara
De La Keur Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 8:20 PM
Deep, dark and twisted....Aleera
Scoville Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 6:12 PM
*shivers* I have goosebumps dearest....my oh my...and you say you have no talent....let the words come from you and you shall see what a magnificent writer you are....i am honored...Mistress
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