Whose Child Is This

Whose child is this, before me laid A gift of God, from his love made Two tiny hands my heart embrace This one who chose my world to grace So innocent, so unafraid As each small feature is surveyed Life as I knew it starts to fade As I gaze down upon this face Whose child is this Oft to my Lord, my wish conveyed Each evening for this child I prayed All my misgivings now displace My emptiness of heart erase Has He at last my fears allayed Whose child is this
02//23/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/10/2012 9:14:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this morn..Great expressive and emotive work..Sara
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Date: 3/22/2012 3:10:00 PM
Such a nice tribute to children - is this about your own?
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Bob Quigley
Date: 3/23/2012 2:55:00 PM
Thank you Joann. No, I have no children.
Date: 3/7/2012 11:57:00 PM
Nice write Bob. However, each line that says "Who's child is this" should properly be displayed as "Whose child is this". When you write "Who's", it is an contraction of "Who is" or "Who has". Also, "lord" should be spelled with a capital "L" if it pertains to God. The rest of your wording and rhyming looks good.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 3/8/2012 8:06:00 AM
Absolutely right on both accounts Bob. I stand corrected. Thanks for the catch.
Date: 3/7/2012 3:30:00 PM
Very nice and beautifully written, all the best - Greg
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Date: 3/7/2012 2:23:00 AM
let's hope the child is yours BoB!~Thx 4 your kind congrats to me!:)
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Date: 3/6/2012 10:10:00 PM
This is wonderful. It's YOUR child and on lease from the Lord. VERY nice.
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Date: 3/6/2012 3:48:00 PM
we see new life and we remember all that is good and kind in the world! Thanks for stopping by today Bob. Light & Love
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Date: 3/6/2012 2:02:00 PM
This is YOUR child, Bob, and such a beautiful way of describing your love. Very much enjoyed reading your poem! Love, carolyn
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Date: 2/29/2012 8:24:00 AM
interesting poem and heartfelt....
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Date: 2/26/2012 2:27:00 PM
Lovely poem Bob - very well written! This child, a gift of God. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/26/2012 9:50:00 AM
tugging at my heartstrings, bob... beautifully done!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:05:00 PM
so sweet lovely write!
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Date: 2/23/2012 7:11:00 PM
Very Good!
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Date: 2/23/2012 1:44:00 PM
It has been awile Bob so good to see you posted her today. Amazing writing today. Love, Carol
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