Who's the Boss - Revised

Who is the Boss - Same old song?

I'll yield since you're very headstrong

        It'll be quite a blow

        But just so you know

It'll end in us both being wrong!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 6:10 PM
Congrats on your well-deserved win, Ralph! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 11:14 AM
Congratulations on your splendid win in John's contest Ralph. An honor to be included with you on the winners list with such wonderful poets. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 10:06 AM
So good to see you at the top Bro. Ralph. Congratulations on a very worthy limerick's honored fourth place. Agape, Moses
Neels Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 4:37 AM
Yielding seems to have it's plus points hey Ralph?? :) hehe, congratulations on your win in JF's contest, love Wilma
Mehta Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 4:32 AM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of john, Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 4:10 AM
Congrats Ralph on your top ten win in the Slapstick Limerick contest... a great write and win..so enjoy my friend with luv...
Mannan Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 12:24 AM
hahahaha A huge congrats for this win.
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:12 PM
Ralph, glad to see you scoring high on the limerick hit list! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 4:02 PM
You always make me laugh with your great limericks, Ralph. Definitely one of the Soup's finest humor writers. And what you say in this one is all too often true! Love, Carolyn
Song Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 9:12 PM
Ralph. Stubborn? Did u write this from personal experience OR did you read my diary!? Great Limerick...witty...honest! Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 4:37 PM
hahaha, good way to put it, Ralph. Clever one!! Hope it ranks high for ya.
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 1:19 PM
Interesting thoughts about life in this one..Enjoyed reading ..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
Pettit Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 10:12 AM
This nice limerick reminds me of a hit song of yesteryear by the late Burl Ives. I consider this a fine example of a limerick.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 6:27 PM
Awesome Ralph and good luck in the contest.. I remember the sitcom Who's the Boss .. it was as great as your entry my friend..
Mehta Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 6:15 PM
Lovely Limeric, with nice images, Ralph
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