Who's That Knocking At My Door





On Christmas Eve, fast asleep,
     since I counted all my sheep,
Snug and warm in bed, I lay
     till I wake on Christmas Day.

Who's that knocking at my door?
     God, it's only half-past four!
Half asleep and half awake,
     suddenly, I start to shake.

Is it bad news, is it good?
     Now alarmed, think if I should
walk the hall down to that door,
     lift the curtain to explore?

Would I see some monster eyes,
     or a burglar in disguise?
Not thinking straight, this is true;
     but I must, this I knew.

Knocking, knocking, still, I hear
     That late-night sound that I fear.
Half-past four on Christmas Eve;
    this- I still could not believe.

Slowing walking with great heed
     to confront this scary deed;
pulled the curtain back to see-
     then I laughed so happily!

A tall box, there in my sight
     'gainst the door, this windy night,
knocking on the glass, you see,
     Christmas late delivery!


December 18, 2015

~2nd Place~
Contest: Who's That Knocking At My Door?
Sponsor: Tammy Reams
Judged: 01/02/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 8, 2016 at 11:57 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your win. ~LINDA~
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January 4, 2016 at 10:01 AM
SANDRA, Congrats on your "Who is Knocking at my Door? WIN... Luv **SKAT**
Haight Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:38 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:03 AM
Lovely! Congrats on your placement, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Thank you, Balveen. I appreciate your visit with your nice comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Makama Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 7:34 AM
when the rains fall, they will feel so warm even in cold if they are poured through your lines. You are superb, fantastic and just wow! Its nice I visited this page. Compliments of the season dear poet!
Haight Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 8:35 PM
Hi Funom, thank you so much for visiting my poem, and leaving such uplifting and complimentary comments. I really appreciate it. All the best to you for the upcoming New Year. Sandra
Gasun Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Wow! This is a very wonderful take in the contest my dear friend, Sandra. I extremely enjoyed! Thank you so much my friend and Good luck! Have a Very Merry Christmas to you and your family! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Haight Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Hi Leonora, thank you so much for visiting my poem and for your uplifting and supportive comment. Merry Christmas to you and yours too! Love and hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Very GREAT take on this contest! You will do great Sandra..*smiles*
Haight Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 8:58 AM
Glad you liked it, Laura! Thanks for the positive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 3:40 PM
Now that is a GREAT knock knock at the door!!!
Haight Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Thanks, Andrea! Had fun working on it. Hugs, Sandra
Gorelick Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 3:17 PM
what a relief! Nice work...BG
Haight Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Ha Ha, glad it kept you in suspense! Thanks for the positive comment, Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Love the twist at the end Sandra good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 8:55 AM
Thanks, Jan. It was a fun write. Hugs, Sandra
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