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Who's Out There Still?

Purple nebula
gas insignia
finds a polished glass
astronomy class
here on earthly sod.

Pluto ice ball
now a rogue moon
White dwarfs sun fall
burnt out too soon.

Lenses peek.
comets streak.
Say to me.

You see
no God?

Odd...

Copyright © Gerard Keogh Jr. | Year Posted 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/25/2010 10:08:00 AM Congratulations Gerard on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/6/2010 6:15:00 AM LOL if there was "something" so large that from the matter of which it was comprised it could create a UNIVERSE do you think a or an "entity" us, could make an instrument with the ability not only to see up, into, through, out the otherside & peer backward to look at it, could be made? If it was made it would not be a telescope for that would only show the interior (some of it;) This may be called Verse/or Rhyme/ not free verse because it contains TOO much rhyme Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/17/2010 12:54:00 PM Congratulations on this wonderful write, Gerard Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 9/17/2010 9:10:00 AM A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 9/17/2010 7:50:00 AM nice one , congrats on your HM Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/17/2010 6:49:00 AM Congratulations on your win Gerard in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/17/2010 12:18:00 AM Gerard congrats on your placement in Rick's contest :) Wilma Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/16/2010 3:23:00 PM Congrats Gerard on your HM in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece my friend..enjoy your honor tonight with luv... Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 9/16/2010 2:39:00 PM This is one of my favorites..your ended it perfectly. BG congrats. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 9/16/2010 1:30:00 PM Congratulation's Gerard on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/16/2010 12:58:00 PM You know, I heard that Pluto is now no longer considered a planet, Gerard. Scientists sometimes see things differently than the rest of us as they look through their telescopes, but I have no doubt that God created everything. Your last three lines are very thought-provoking. Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 9/6/2010 6:15:00 PM good one , is it for the contest? good luck if so Login to Reply