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Who's Out There Still?

Purple nebula
gas insignia
finds a polished glass
astronomy class
here on earthly sod.

Pluto ice ball
now a rogue moon
White dwarfs sun fall
burnt out too soon.

Lenses peek.
comets streak.
Say to me.

You see
no God?

Odd...

naturesciencei do not know?

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Carol Sunshine Brown

October 25, 2010 at 10:08 AM

Congratulations Gerard on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

October 6, 2010 at 6:15 AM

LOL if there was "something" so large that from the matter of which it was comprised it could create a UNIVERSE do you think a or an "entity" us, could make an instrument with the ability not only to see up, into, through, out the otherside & peer backward to look at it, could be made? If it was made it would not be a telescope for that would only show the interior (some of it;) This may be called Verse/or Rhyme/ not free verse because it contains TOO much rhyme

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 17, 2010 at 12:54 PM

Congratulations on this wonderful write, Gerard

Caryl Muzzey

September 17, 2010 at 9:10 AM

A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl

Francine Roberts

September 17, 2010 at 7:50 AM

nice one , congrats on your HM

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 17, 2010 at 6:49 AM

Congratulations on your win Gerard in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

September 17, 2010 at 12:18 AM

Gerard congrats on your placement in Rick's contest :) Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 16, 2010 at 3:23 PM

Congrats Gerard on your HM in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece my friend..enjoy your honor tonight with luv...

Barbara Gorelick

September 16, 2010 at 2:39 PM

This is one of my favorites..your ended it perfectly. BG congrats.

James Fraser

September 16, 2010 at 1:30 PM

Congratulation's Gerard on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

September 16, 2010 at 12:58 PM

You know, I heard that Pluto is now no longer considered a planet, Gerard. Scientists sometimes see things differently than the rest of us as they look through their telescopes, but I have no doubt that God created everything. Your last three lines are very thought-provoking. Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn