Who's Flirting With Whom

Who’s Flirting With Whom


A dangerous game this flirting.
Removing the breastplate
lowering the defenses
playing the jester.

Approaching the fully armed,
seeking a weakness in their defenses
toying with rebuke, rejection
stumbling over words.

“Is that your dog?”
“Does he want ketchup
with my calf?”

“No, but he is partial to fries.”

She gave me her number,
offered to pay any medical bills.

I gave her my number,
offered to take her out for fries.

The dog snarled and gave me that
back off buddy look.

The ER nurse said that I had very nice legs
the scarring would be minimal.
She intimated that the grey at my temples
accentuated the flecks of gold in my eyes.

I blushed. 

She gave me her number.



John G. Lawless
7/13/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 6:05 PM
JOHN. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
Lamoureux Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 8:09 AM
Ha ha, you da man! I also wanted to say thanks for choosing my poem for your contest.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 2:49 AM
Wonderful write n win John, congrats!
Carter Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 8:47 AM
I like the "seeking a weakness in their defenses " line... Great flirt congrats John!
Wigley Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 9:29 PM
This is great, John, made me smile muchly. A 7 for not just the poem but your dogged determination. Regards, Viv
La France Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 5:22 PM
John, lol this is hilarious, love it 7 and congratulations and thanks for visiting my poem, glances winks smiles
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:43 PM
this one mad me smile John congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Jan, I think most men and women will us any situation as an opportunity to flirt
A  Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:39 PM
JOHN, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:48 PM
Thank you SKAT
Nance Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:08 PM
What an interesting story nicely done
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Thanks Casarah, my wife claims that i still flirt but I claim it's just me being me and talking stupid with the ladies
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