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Who’s Flirting With Whom A dangerous game this flirting. Removing the breastplate lowering the defenses playing the jester. Approaching the fully armed, seeking a weakness in their defenses toying with rebuke, rejection stumbling over words. “Is that your dog?” “Does he want ketchup with my calf?” “No, but he is partial to fries.” She gave me her number, offered to pay any medical bills. I gave her my number, offered to take her out for fries. The dog snarled and gave me that back off buddy look. The ER nurse said that I had very nice legs the scarring would be minimal. She intimated that the grey at my temples accentuated the flecks of gold in my eyes. I blushed. She gave me her number. John G. Lawless 7/13/2015

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Date: 7/24/2015 6:05:00 PM
JOHN. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
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Date: 7/23/2015 8:09:00 AM
Ha ha, you da man! I also wanted to say thanks for choosing my poem for your contest.
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Date: 7/22/2015 2:49:00 AM
Wonderful write n win John, congrats!
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Date: 7/21/2015 8:47:00 AM
I like the "seeking a weakness in their defenses " line... Great flirt congrats John!
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Date: 7/20/2015 9:29:00 PM
This is great, John, made me smile muchly. A 7 for not just the poem but your dogged determination. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/20/2015 5:22:00 PM
John, lol this is hilarious, love it 7 and congratulations and thanks for visiting my poem, glances winks smiles
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:43:00 PM
this one mad me smile John congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2015 2:50:00 PM
Jan, I think most men and women will us any situation as an opportunity to flirt
Date: 7/20/2015 2:39:00 PM
JOHN, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
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John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2015 2:48:00 PM
Thank you SKAT
Date: 7/20/2015 2:08:00 PM
What an interesting story nicely done
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John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2015 2:47:00 PM
Thanks Casarah, my wife claims that i still flirt but I claim it's just me being me and talking stupid with the ladies

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