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The hallow inside the given tree that calls and beckons to me. I cannot help but become enraptured of all there is to see. The dancing faeries hop around with immense delight. Oh, this is such a pleasing sight. But, behold! The night is free! I feel drawn to the murky blanket of the nocturnal time. The glittering hues of pale pink and baby blue Don some sort of mysterious hue As I walk around the cobblestone path, The mystique of the undulation of colors derives from those who purloin babies from mothers as the giggle and laugh and steal. The hated lies that come Foaming out and dropped of children that formed not a bout. As they are pacified by glittering dreams tonight. The lullabies soothe and bathe them as they lie down. The songs and chants are hypnotic as I tread that path. I warily glance to the night as I could be taken. The last dew left on the bottom of the lily tonight. It was the Eve of the Hallow and not a soul was in sight, yet twinkling lights kept rebounding up high. I clutched my child unto my chest. Lest he be taken from my breast. Oh, behold, as the shining intensified. Nothing was left for me to be pacified.

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Date: 5/5/2014 1:23:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Loren :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/1/2014 9:56:00 AM
Loren, , your first poem was enjoyable. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/30/2014 9:57:00 PM
Excellent imagery displayed here...felt as if I was walking along with you...enjoyed!
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Date: 4/30/2014 10:22:00 AM
Hi Loren, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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