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Whooping It Up

Allow me to share my news
About my defiant missing muse 
She has the big time muse blues
I should have seen the clues
Though to discuss she did refuse

I told her ‘to put on her big girl shoes’
Make a decision …. ‘you choose’
With attitude she said ‘ well, you lose’
Walked away with a look that left a bruise

She is now whooping it up on a cruise
Heading to the land of kangaroos
Drinking way, way too much booze
I hear she’s sporting two new tattoos

Without her my poetry sits and stews
My flame softly flickers yet no fire pursues
So , understandably her behaviour I will excuse
If she just comes back and lights my fuse!!

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John Read Date: 10/7/2024 9:33:00 AM Hi Deb I can see your muse has returned. Xx Login to Reply

Hilda Greenhough Date: 10/1/2024 7:38:00 PM She may come back with some interesting Outback material. This poem was wonderful. It didn't need the muse. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 10/5/2024 12:31:00 AM Thankyou sweet Hilda….always lovely to read your comments! Debx

Maria Williams Date: 9/30/2024 8:47:00 PM A delightful humourous poem Deb that gave me a few chuckles. I feel that your 'boozy Mews, with the two tattoos, will get rid of her blues in the land down under after the cruise. If you see her ask her to pay me a visit in the 'land down under' and I'll help set her right for you - lol. Thanks for sharing. Maria Login to Reply Deb M Date: 10/5/2024 12:30:00 AM Hi Maria….nice to meet you…another fellow Aussie! Really pleased you enjoyed my silliness and it gave you a few chuckles….my work is done hehe!! Thankyou so much commenting its appreciated! Debx

Sotto Poet Date: 9/30/2024 2:05:00 PM Great poem explores the theme of creative inspiration, personified as a "missing muse." Login to Reply Deb M Date: 10/1/2024 1:25:00 PM Nice to see you Lasaad! Thankyou…Debx

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/30/2024 1:21:00 PM Good one. I like the rhyming. It has good rhythm and flow as well. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K Login to Reply Deb M Date: 10/5/2024 12:36:00 AM Thankyou so much Sara! Debx

Joseph May Date: 9/30/2024 12:09:00 PM I like how you did this in Monorhyme, As your ' defiant muse gets the blues" Login to Reply Deb M Date: 10/5/2024 12:33:00 AM Cheers Joseph…..appreciate your thoughts….Thanks…Debx

Jay Narain Date: 9/30/2024 10:02:00 AM nice work True, it is hard to write a poem without a muse. I amstruggling on this too. Login to Reply Deb M Date: 10/1/2024 1:26:00 PM Thanks Jay…..keep persevering your muse will return! Debx

Gary Radice Date: 9/30/2024 12:37:00 AM I always smile when people write great poetry about their missing muse. The irony :) At least you knew yours had gone on a cruise Deb. Had it been a few weeks back I would have asked you if you could ask your muse if mine was on the same boat. I guess she may have been, locked in her cabin without a thought of sending even a postcard. I'm rambling. Loved the monorhyme. :) Cheers - Gary Login to Reply Deb M Date: 10/5/2024 12:43:00 AM Hehe locked in a cabin at least she’s not whooping it up!! Always a pleasure Gary! Thanks…Debx

Ilene Bauer Date: 9/29/2024 10:43:00 AM this is delightful, deb! i think she's back, though, at least temporarily... Login to Reply Deb M Date: 10/1/2024 1:24:00 PM Awww thanks ilene….l hope shes back for a while Ha…if not l am putting my foot and finding a new one!! Thanks…Debx

Paula Goldsmith Date: 9/29/2024 8:54:00 AM WOW!!! I love this. Thanks for the laugh. I think you need to put on your shoes. For you will not lose. Tell your Old muse the news. You went and bought a brighter/New/younger Muse. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away with your brighter/New/younger Muse.......... Login to Reply Deb M Date: 10/5/2024 12:39:00 AM Happy to hear it gave you a laugh Paula….lovely to reading your comment my friend! Thanks…Debx

Clive Culverhouse Date: 9/29/2024 7:32:00 AM fun read, the land of kangaroos! nice monorhyme Deb Login to Reply Deb M Date: 10/5/2024 12:37:00 AM Cheers Clive….l know you enjoy a wee bit of silliness Ha! Deb x

Jan Allison Date: 9/29/2024 6:03:00 AM glad she allowed you to post this gem before she went awol, I spend less and less time on soup. I am busy editing next book am up to 270 with about another 100 to check and a few more to write down from my voice recorder lol but to be honest the issues on soup and the trolls do nothing to lure me back at the moment. hugs jan xx Login to Reply Deb M Date: 10/5/2024 12:41:00 AM Hi Jan from the IOM….as always appreciate your thoughts my lovely friend! Debx