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Who Will Save Our Children

The child came into the school office nervously, not understanding. So many people were upset, some stared, some glared, some pointed. “His backpack smells awful!” His teacher was heard to say. “I almost retched when I opened it.” “The whole hallways stinks,” the custodian chimed in. He shook his head. “His mother should have known better than to have sent him with it in the first place.” The child feels ashamed. Less than. Sad. The little one we’ve let down For five years already goes Home not fully understanding What else he’s done wrong, But knowing there will be a Big punishment when he Gets home. Especially if his Mother has to wake up to Answer the phone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/2/2018 5:43:00 PM
It is time for this mother, and others like her, to wake up. Neglect is a form of child abuse and I often wonder what will become of children who don't receive the love and attention they deserve. Well said!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/2/2018 10:24:00 PM
Carolyn, the longer I am a school counselor, the more I have to admit orphanages might be the best places for these sad urchins who are raising themselves in the worst conditions. The system has failed them; we have failed them. Thanks for your visit.
Date: 4/2/2018 5:09:00 PM
So sad. I notice things but don’t declare it to the world! Bad breath, body odor, etc.. You still love those around you. When you get to know people, you begin to love them. Nicely said, my friend with a fine soul!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/2/2018 5:22:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I think you understand so completely!

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