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Who Will I Follow

So many ask me to follow them through rusty gates and broken doors Where will I be led whom shall I follow Are their directions better than my own? Will I lead myself down the garden path? confusion Perplexed by messages What will satisfy? Is there meaning to life? Blind guides speak loudly painting pretty pictures on my mind Enticing me with their magic They speak like they know They want me to see what they think they see It is so close just over the next horizon Purpose, serenity Being at one with the universe Peace, love, understanding I pick up a book It warns me there is but one way Directed to the only Son A gift from the Father The creator of all things Earthly wisdom to be ignored become as a little child The opposite of all that I had known A single narrow path I am slowly guided along no longer alone I know who I will follow I am on the road to home

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Date: 2/27/2013 9:42:00 PM
Very inspirational. I am sure we can all relate to this poem. The questions you ask I often ask too, I guess in a different wording hihi. Truly a beautiful piece of work. Keep it up! Always, Laura
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2013 7:12:00 AM
Thanks Laura.
Date: 2/27/2013 8:47:00 PM
Beautiful poem. You are on the right track. We have to believe in something, or will fall for anything. Richard thanks for liking my picture. You look pretty good yourself. Many blessings. Lucilla
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2013 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Lucilla. What we believe in is far more important than believing. Believe in the wrong thing and you will surely fall.
Date: 2/24/2013 7:57:00 AM
A very wise choice, Mon ami! Excellent! Highest mark. Thank you for changing the avatar. Yes, now it is you, So imposing and so true! I am a Canadian, nevertheless!Ha-ha.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2013 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios.
Date: 2/23/2013 11:23:00 PM
Your heart has spoken, yet again, Richard- your truth. Thank you for sharing as it will always light another's path along the way home. Always, Annalise
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2013 11:31:00 PM
Thanks Annalise. The path may be narrow but there is enough room for all.
Date: 2/23/2013 6:29:00 PM
Wow, touching and inspiring Rick :), wishing you a great afternoon and wonderful Saturday night :) hug, Yenny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2013 6:53:00 PM
Thanks Yanny, busy day no time to write a poem today.
Date: 2/23/2013 3:16:00 PM
well like your poetry Richard to follow, would be very hard to emulate, and i think life's like that sometimes,, that how i read your awesome poem...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2013 6:53:00 PM
Thanks Harry
Date: 2/23/2013 11:45:00 AM
the Son of Man has the power to forgive sins nice poem
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2013 6:54:00 PM
Thanks Christopher
Date: 2/22/2013 6:09:00 PM
Ah yes, Richard...the rocky and jagged path that few can or will follow but he holds our hand and guides us home...wonderful wisdom and insight my friend - Tim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2013 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Tim
Date: 2/22/2013 5:28:00 PM
wow, great poem this is. Love that part about becoming as a little child. . . I am on the road home!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2013 5:29:00 PM
It appears we are related. So we will either meet one day in this world or the next.
Date: 2/22/2013 4:09:00 PM
It becomes a peaceful place when we realize who to follow..loved your poem
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2013 5:11:00 PM
You got that right Donna.
Date: 2/22/2013 3:35:00 PM
Some may tell you to follow the One, and others may drag you to Theirs; To the some it might be the Son, and to others it could be tales- A dilemma makes every person eager to run, but it is one of each one's affairs!! It is a gigantic poem.. Few in words but too deep in meaning! Loved it!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2013 5:12:00 PM
Thanks Jad
Date: 2/22/2013 2:42:00 PM
- Beautiful poem! - BIG EYES THAT LOOK AT ME!! - Have a relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2013 2:48:00 PM
i will probably change pretty soon, don't wish to distaract. :)
Date: 2/22/2013 1:21:00 PM
Like this one Richard, the narrow path that not many find, follow it dear boy and all the best xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2013 2:39:00 PM
thanks Mandy
Date: 2/22/2013 12:34:00 PM
Richard!!!! I'm so so glad! I was reading along and wondering...about my post..thinking how much I wanted to write...JESUS! Follow JESUS! Wow...I'm so happy that you finished this poem this way. "For there is no other name under heaven given to man by which he can be saved!" :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2013 5:13:00 PM
It's important to finish well. :0)

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