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Who Will I Fall In Love With Today

Sweet subtle ombre bob framing her delicate face Sleek shoulder-skimming hazel sashaying with her every grace French braids or just a pony and a baseball cap hiding behind mirrored sunglasses with coach purse and a dangling strap A woman of a thousand looks each and every one better than the next She has the look that special look cheeks aglow eyes dazzling in the moonlight she's the one I just know All dressed up in pearls and heels or faded jeans with a white t-shirt fitting right whatever the look, whatever the style I am always amazed and I always do wonder Who is the woman I'm going to fall in love with tonight

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Date: 11/27/2015 6:06:00 PM
Aren't you glad she is alluring? You will never be bored and it is great to be in suspense. Excellently done Blessings Edith
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Date: 11/24/2015 9:22:00 AM
She sounds enchanting!
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Date: 11/24/2015 3:55:00 AM
- Your heart is already taken..... love is found long ago - A great poem, Tim - I wish you a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/24/2015 3:44:00 AM
WOW, what am I doing up on your poem today Tim? ha-ha... Just kidding:) What a wonderful poem. That look that look. Yup,, you are hooked. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/23/2015 9:35:00 PM
So many women - so little time! Enjoyable poem here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/23/2015 10:36:00 PM
Thanks Matthew.
Date: 11/23/2015 8:44:00 PM
He loves the same woman, but her allure is that she's just as irresistible to him in pony tail and blue jeans(not your kind of genes, John) as she is in fancy clothes in the moonlight. Now if I'm wrong, I'll have to eat some of Poe's crow.
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Date: 11/23/2015 10:36:00 PM
You don't have to eat any crow Lin. He falls in love with the same woman day after day in all her different looks
Date: 11/23/2015 8:37:00 PM
I think you're referring to the same woman right, your wife, she changes up the look to keep it interesting, you are mystified, every time you see her it's like a new adventure, did I get your take on it right? Think so, anyway enjoyed it.JDH
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Date: 11/23/2015 10:34:00 PM
Thanks John. Yes it is the same woman
Date: 11/23/2015 3:33:00 PM
Hope the woman you fall in love with in your dreams will be the same one in your dawn..Lovely descriptions in the poem..Sweet poem .
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/23/2015 10:33:00 PM
I do as well....thanks for reading Charma

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