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Who Us

Who Us?

If we smile real cute they won’t know it’s us
Who stole all the bananas off the bus
Quick throw the peels
Under the wheels
And pretend that nothing is up!


10/02/11

Received 5th plcae in "limericks hilarious" contest

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Sara Kendrick

October 26, 2011 at 1:05 PM

Good one..A seriously slippery one...Congrats ..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 26, 2011 at 6:17 AM

Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Limericks" contest Susan. Love, Carol

John Freeman

October 25, 2011 at 6:39 PM

A nice present, Susan, thanks for supporting my contest, the pleasure was mine to read. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 3, 2011 at 11:43 AM

super cool and creative write Susan.. smiling with this one luv.. yes we try to maintain 'buff' .. watching diets and exercising a lot.. moving has sharpened our aches and pains ..haha.. don't need to work out this month.. cheerios are a great snack food..but everything in moderation luv.. good luck in the contest...

Barbara Gorelick

October 2, 2011 at 6:05 PM

Good one Susan...Peels under the wheels is an awsome phrase....BG

Andrea Dietrich

October 2, 2011 at 1:38 PM

hahaha, this conjures up the consequence of throwing the peels under the bus. I can just see it slipping off a mountain or something. VEry well done, Susan. hey, is your computer slow at Soup lately. I thought I finally had it good changing to Firefox and now I am going slow again. DANG. I am trying so hard to keep up here, now I'm ignoring hotmail. How I hope my life gets back to normal soon. LUv, Andrea