Who Kills Who Here

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the truth is gunned down in this new modern society of liars 

Lets pull the trigger to create a smoking gun

bang when cold steel feels the hot lead pellets burn

Death becomes the reaper aiming at a target set guilty

tools of the dark side work tirelessly spilling blood

The victim has no choice in life but surrender to a murderer

what ever mask you wore will be forever remembered deeply ingrained

To judge a character without justice to plead innocent 

shows a burning hate that will never be satisfied

Those shady loveless clouds shall cover the mountain

where rivers join the ocean's together bound

in salt that  remains spiced underneath pearls

by the footprints left upon the shores of life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/2/2020 12:50:00 PM
The truth, Lie's bloody victim. Read it 5 times, my best summation, am I close? Enjoyed my excursion liam, thanks...
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/3/2020 1:08:00 PM
smiling charlie it was aimed at the W.H.O filled with truth, brother you know me i dice my words from my soul, you were pretty much on target wishing you a blessed week and thank you for your time
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