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the truth is gunned down in this new modern society of liars 

Lets pull the trigger to create a smoking gun bang when cold steel feels the hot lead pellets burn Death becomes the reaper aiming at a target set guilty tools of the dark side work tirelessly spilling blood The victim has no choice in life but surrender to a murderer what ever mask you wore will be forever remembered deeply ingrained To judge a character without justice to plead innocent shows a burning hate that will never be satisfied Those shady loveless clouds shall cover the mountain where rivers join the ocean's together bound in salt that remains spiced underneath pearls by the footprints left upon the shores of life

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Date: 4/2/2020 12:50:00 PM
The truth, Lie's bloody victim. Read it 5 times, my best summation, am I close? Enjoyed my excursion liam, thanks...
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/3/2020 1:08:00 PM
smiling charlie it was aimed at the W.H.O filled with truth, brother you know me i dice my words from my soul, you were pretty much on target wishing you a blessed week and thank you for your time

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