Who Is To Blame

We have to stop complaining, my friend

For all hardships we meet up on our way


Perhaps


The calamities that are befalling upon us 

Are but the result, of our inner disarray! 




© Demetrios Trifiatis
  09 JANUARY 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mcdaid Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 12:44 PM
very well put demetrios so much truth in so few a words yet sometimes the disarrays are caused by poor human judgement casting someone wrongly his will be done i always say smiling dear pal powerful pen
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January 11, 2015 at 3:55 PM
So true....so true....Thank you for giving me food for thought tonight, my dear poet. May your wisdom always light my way....Hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
January 12, 2015 at 5:52 AM
My dearest, Eileen, my resolution of this year, my promise to our Lord is to use the inspiration He provides me with to encourage those who need encouragement and stand by those who are in need of friendship and love! You are the first to hear that. I pray not to betray the promise I have given! Thank you for your help and your precious visits!
Roper Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 9:51 AM
So true, Demetrios, Blessings to you sir and have a wonderful weeken
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January 10, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Thank you my dear friend, Eve! God bless you and have a wonderful weekend with the little angel of yours!
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January 10, 2015 at 6:40 AM
So true. The last piece I wrote brought with it some guilt. I did not mean it to sound like complaining but as I read it again, it sounds like it. My intention was just to vent. I am happy all the world affords me. We must be careful how we lay our words. Thank you for the gentle reminder. This is a deep important write!
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January 10, 2015 at 7:18 AM
I will have a look to see what you mean my friend, Maurice! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!
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January 9, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Well done and truth told... Enjoyed Demetrios - Verlena
Trifiatis Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 7:20 AM
I am double lucky today for I have received two visits from your part dear, Verlena! Thank you so much!
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January 9, 2015 at 9:13 AM
- Really something to think about ...... and it's true - Bravo, my friend, Demetrios - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Thank you my friend, Anne-Lise! Have a wonderful weekend!
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January 9, 2015 at 8:32 AM
I add my agreement as well.
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January 9, 2015 at 2:07 PM
I am happy that we see eye-to-eye on the subject dear, Richard! Thank you!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 4:42 AM
I so agree with the message your poem conveys Demetrios. Wonderful poetry for thought!
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January 9, 2015 at 7:10 AM
Thank you, Connie! I am happy we are in agreement!
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