Who I am

It’s hard to know who I am when 
who I was is no more 
but still lingers and her fingers 
stick and poke my brain with remembers that sting.
But here’s the thing, 
remembers may be real or only half, 
the half that lingers still but not the whole, 
others take their halves when they go. 
So not halves, maybe a quarter? 
How much do I take that isn’t mine? 
These burdens that rarely cease, 
thoughts race chaotic,
the furrow in my brow ever creases.  
I breathe in and out
Why am I so dramatic 
I lay down to sleep in pieces
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Al-Khalili Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 9:14 PM
How can one lay down in peace in such torment of not knowing who one is? What truth you shared is very relevant to how one feels with loss...yet who am I to know what you've been through? Thank you for sharing and congratulations for being featured.
Styke Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 4:52 AM
Thank you for your insightful comment :) I grappled with the last line as well. Mental trauma and spiritual wellness are a delicate balance I walk each day. I am grateful that I have a faith that sustains me even when the demons of my past torment me.
Schlesinger-Fleming Avatar
August 12, 2024 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. I enjoyed it very much, and invite you to read " I Am That", my poem along a similar theme. Looking forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry.
Styke Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Thank you for your kind comment :). I will check out I am That :)
Agustin Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 8:02 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Styke Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 4:53 AM
Thank you :)
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