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Who Bloks Who

Who Bloks Who?

( think A Space Odyssey, Hal when reading this)


Hi Dave..
Hi Arthur..
I might Blok you Dave
Ah you may but then I would have to Blok you too
Still Dave I would be first to Blok so I would win
Oh Arthur you can try, but I still may out Blok you
Ok Dave I see you are challenging me, so I am so gonna Blok you
You just watch Dave........
	Do neglect all your dear creations
Not Bad Arthur, however I one up that Blok……
	Do neglect all your hot earthly passions
How about this one Dave.....
	Think in days, and say prayers in nights.
Well Arthur I can do so much better.....
	If your spirit is burning and troubling,
	Drive your high inspiration away
Maybe, maybe not, 
	Only wisdom is ready for coming
	To Great Night from the life’s everyday
Arthur, I one up yet again!!
	On the earth you will not be awarded.
	In clear spirits before the God’s face
Ah ha, and now, the grand finale, chess master am I
	Slow fade in a right, lone mode
	At the leave of the icon lamp’s blaze...


Notes: I will soon post the answer to this riddle, in the mean time
who can figure out this “infinite dot universe poem” ?

Answers: I wrote this as two poets challenging each other on their knowledge of a very famous Russian poet, by reciting lines from one of his poems to each other! .... the famous poets name is of course “ Alexander Blok”

Alexander Alexandrovich Blok; 28 November [O.S. 16 November] 1880 – 7 August 1921) was a Russian lyrical poet. And being a “lyrical poet” well I guess you all know why I choose Dave (Lyric Man) as one of the poets! The photo above is ofcourse a portrait of Alexander Blok !
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Callus Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 4:55 AM
OK! This is good....sorry I came late to the party...spoilt my chance to work the riddle out:) Enjoyed! / paul
Vaso Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Thanks Paul!
Roper Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 11:10 PM
Please don't block me I love your work. I'm not good with riddles so I'll stay out of this one a 7 Hugs Eve :~)
Vaso Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Eve you are too beautiful to ever be blocked!!!!
Nunez Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 9:01 PM
Smart with the riddles, as usual. Since I am too late for the party, I just had a smile. ..:-)
Vaso Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 9:08 PM
Its never to late for the party!!!!!!! You are just in time for drinks!!!!!
Smith Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 2:29 PM
Very clever write and I read Alexanders lines separately too...they are outstanding
Vaso Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 9:07 PM
Yes he is a very famous poet, of course the lines are a translation so maybe not as good as the Russian lines.
Andresen Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 2:08 PM
- Hope you do not want to "block" me :) - Well written, Arthur ! - I wish you a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 2:11 PM
- Yes, I know ...... just a joke :)
Vaso Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 2:10 PM
Thanks Anne, it was about "Alexander Blok" not about blocking! LOL xxx
Vaso Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 1:59 PM
I wrote this as two poets challenging each other on their knowledge of a very famous Russian poet, by reciting lines from one of his poems to each other! .... the famous poets name is of course “ Alexander Blok”
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 1:06 PM
Oh boy, what a circus over here at Soup. And you made a deep thinking poem out of it. Amazing!!
Vaso Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Thanks Andrea, I updated the notes now!
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 7:58 AM
on the dot, arthur.. my lips are sealed... some people get a kick from being sour grapes, wahhaa!.. darn good work!.. huggs
Vaso Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Thanks Nette, I added some notes to explain the meaning of the poem!!!!
Allison Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 1:55 AM
Very clever Arthur if i ever pawn my hubby you can be my knight in shining armour - can spend all day blocking eachothers every move oh but then if you block me you can't read my replies - oh how dumb can people who block me be - can still read the comments just cant reply hee hee hee:-) Hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Thanks Jan, I have updated the notes!
A. Sharma Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 10:35 PM
Real chess master u r Arthur,, lay the board everyday, win or lose, live and live, and if die, be another dot in the infinite universe, if I construed right?
Vaso Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 10:45 PM
Yes, but the real clue is "Blok" and a country known for Chess!!!! :)
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