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Who Are You ¿ What can you see of you When everyone around you Only sees the worst of you When they are addicted to the weakness Which plays to their ego What truth of you Is shown you In the guise of love They drown you Does their habitual then become you Does it fit All that you see is the useless me The troublesome And to much trouble to be You What else can you see of you When everyone around you Only sees the worst of you They convince you of your ineptitude A platitude which describes You And never looks further into The you They have created The you They take for granted They are too comfortable With heir impressions Way too sure of their interpretations And so self serving in their conclusions Label you Lets them use you And easily Abuse you Without a thought or moment of conscience And the great big wheel Rolls To its own great big circle You listen You accept And in the end Become what they said Was true of you And they have the affront to call this Love Who’s next in their game of self-embellishment ……………………………………………………………………………….. but Perhaps You would like to see things from a different point of view See all the love And all the beauty I see in you Perhaps You would like to see your strength Your courage Maybe You would like to see yourself worthy Eminently you are Perhaps You would care to see How I have seen your struggle With a tender heart And gentle hands That others would curl to fists In the face of their demands Maybe All you see of you Is what they want you to Maybe You are far more So much more I am sure That like a wild stallion They seek to restrain For the fear of discovering that they Are less And you You are so much more Perhaps Someday You will see the lies For what they are Perhaps Someday You will look at yourself And see yourself through my eyes All the love You really are

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/15/2009 7:59:00 AM
This is so touching... just beautiful Colin. Thank you also for your kind comments and the visit :) I' ¡m bueno mi amigo, gracias! Gozo el leer de su trabajo también. ;) (don't be impressed, I'm a Babelfish junkie) lol! It's a goal to learn more then one language yes, so I like to experiment with mixing in a poem or two of mine so I can 'learn' and lock that phrase/language into my mind. Via my poems. Hugs! Again, very enjoyable to read you.
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Date: 5/13/2009 6:07:00 PM
This touched me in a way I didn't see coming. Going into my fav's.-AA
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:06:00 PM
You are an amazing talent. I enjoy when you take me on a journey and turn the course mid way to what could be if we master our own course. Great job kid.
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Date: 5/3/2009 2:25:00 PM
Mountain top writing brother....you elevated your heart and pen to another level.....send some of your talent my way.
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Date: 5/3/2009 12:37:00 PM
this is deep,i like the beggining and then the outturn,and the way you see deep in this persona you care for--this is wonderful and its going in my fav-and now i read it again---charma;-)
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Date: 5/3/2009 10:57:00 AM
A balance seen here lets the reader acknowledge the passion that 's expressed. Self-discovery has its' voice, and love (true love) is always easy to recognize. thanks. jan
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Date: 5/3/2009 10:47:00 AM
Wonderful writing with so many layers...you are a talent my friend.. your writing speaks deeply.
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Date: 5/3/2009 10:27:00 AM
Self perception is something that confounds me constantly...It's hard to care about someone so deeply and watch them shapeshift into molds made by passive aggressive relationships...the tendency is to be appeasing to the boundaries set for them and when that relationship ends the boundaries remain permanent somehow A great piece of writing Colin...as always! Right on, Write on!! Steve
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Date: 5/3/2009 8:59:00 AM
Wow, Colin! You have hit on a personal concern for me. My brother tries to build me up when he sees my sister putting me down. I wish I could see myself through my brother's eyes, but my sister is the dominant force in our family. Thank God there are people who can see our positive qualities. Truly, we should all see ourselves through the eyes of those who love us. Outstanding poem! Love, CD
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