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Who Are They Trying To Impress

Who Are They Trying to Impress? A cross between the bride of Frankenstein And the Dalmatians’ Cruella De Ville See teens walking at malls; glad they’re not mine Absurd appearances give me a chill Parents with tattoos ride on a Harley Leather coats and gloves cut off at knuckles Sprung from these roots that appear so gnarly Teens upstaging their folks give me chuckles Written for John Freeman's Boisterous Comedy Contest

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Date: 8/23/2011 12:39:00 PM
I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )
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Date: 8/22/2011 4:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Diane. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Diane
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Date: 8/21/2011 10:09:00 PM
Thanks for the honor of your poem's class in my contest Diane, Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/21/2011 5:21:00 PM
hey Diane congrats on a great win David
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:39:00 PM
Congrats Diane on a wonderful win with this witty write .. enjoy ...
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Date: 8/18/2011 8:01:00 AM
Thus be it ever so. Tony
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