Who Am I

Take a look at me, can you see something
It's me a human being,
If you take a look in deeper behind the good,
You will get something odd
There lives terrible things called sins, 
They always control my feelings 
It's all about me,who you can see
I can do crime similar to a sea
My soul is not free from bad thoughts
I always do quarell with sins 
My sins must be punished as it took my place 
How can open my blind eyes to grace
If they die then I can live in tranquility 
They chose my weak heart for stupidity 
Take a look again at me, what you can see
I am a human being who is alwasy busy
I am a sinner, yes I know that 
That's why I deserve everyone's hate 
Now I need a Savior 
Who can make me free from error.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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