Who Am I

Exhales, crackles and gasps ,
jumping hairs and sickening visions as the wind whistled pass; 
a quiet question knocks the door of my mind, who am I? 
 Picture me in a yellow sun dress, head up, confident and proudly African.
  I sway effortlessly through a field of red roses with my nigro hair struggling to flow in the dry wind.
 I looked happy with my wide black nose glistening in the solar heat.
 Above me was a clear blue sky with floating mushroom clouds ready to pop and 
a sun peeping through, like God’s eye on man.
 I inhaled the dry dusty harmattan breeze, laid back on the dark brown soil and watched black kites fly, 
then, a thunder rumbled in a distance and it began to rain. 
The rain washed the colour off the flowers, turned the sky grey.
 I was left running to find a cave, but everywhere was open, and nowhere to stay,
 so I let the drops of acidic rain, turn me white and my identity fades.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/8/2016 11:34:00 AM
Wow! Your writing is powerful! 7
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Deborah Dambani
Date: 12/9/2016 9:55:00 AM
Thanks Kim,,,
Date: 11/12/2016 2:08:00 PM
A great poet for all seasons. Sincere admiration. I found intelligent wishing thinking serenity in a strange world of indifference looking through the transparent glass of your poem.Congrat.
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Deborah Dambani
Date: 11/12/2016 3:13:00 PM
Thanks dear..
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