Who Am I

Quote Written By Poet "In youth we can do all things. In middle age we can still dream. Seniors can only reminisce."

              In middle age,
        feeling grown up over the years.
      A flower opening up to the world,
        know where I am going.
  Now standing firm and tall through many challenges,
  I am enjoying what life has to give me now.
    I can see this big world clearly,
  I am ready to finish the run of life strong.

              With each new day,
        showing me how to be better.
      A better wife, a mother and a friend,
        letting peace show brightly.
  Giving makes the world go around with joy to all,
  it is fun to give away time and ideas.
    I love writing for my readers,
  giving them a smile or two as they read along.
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La France Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 6:24 AM
Paula, congratulations on your win in my contest, Who Am I, your poem is wonderfully written, I love it and the quote, Constance
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December 26, 2024 at 12:21 PM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Who Am I" write to be wonderfully written, you love it and the quote. Thanks for having the contest/for my placement. I say, age is just a number. It was fun to bring this one to life. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Richards Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 9:33 PM
Congratulations on your win, Paula. I would like to think that we seniors can still dream through our poetry. Lovely write.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 11:48 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Who Am I" write. Oh yes, seniors can still dream through their poetry. Remember age is just a number. No stopping the seniors in the world of today. Right??? Have a blessed day writing away.............
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December 13, 2024 at 5:22 PM
Back with congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest. Well done Paula… Beryl
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December 15, 2024 at 11:45 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Who Am I" write. Thanks for coming back to read again. It was a fun contest. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Poet Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 6:35 AM
Very well-crafted poem, Paula. Your wonderful poem was just the right answer to the prompt. Congratulations on your win.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 11:43 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Who Am I" write to be a Very well-crafted poem. Its great to see you back writing again. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Goldsmith Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 9:33 AM
"2 Place" Who Am I ~Date Written:11/13/2024~Written By Human Poet
George Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 7:41 PM
Hi Paula, you are so sprightly and level headed, making yourself grow and become useful to others. You are a genial presence here. Enjoyed the way you revealed your identity! All the Best, dear.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 8:43 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for All the Best. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Who Am I" write. At any age we can live a very full life. Age is just a number. Think young/stay young/enjoy life/be thankful. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Buehler Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 8:29 PM
Paula your wonderful work srikes a chord with me, and it also answers the question in the title, quite well. A lovely work! Blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 8:39 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Who Am I" write to be A lovely work. Many different phases in life as we age. Age is just a number. Have Fun... Have a blessed day writing away.............
Jones Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 10:52 AM
I like your write but share a different opinion of seniors. They can do more than reminisce I feel but it depends on mindset and mobility and motivation. Enjoyed reading Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 8:37 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Who Am I" write. Yes, many seniors live a very full life yet they can still reminisce. Age is just a number. Think young/stay young/enjoy life/be thankful. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Proxenos Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Younger, middle and more senior, all are mere phases in our busy LIFE. I enjoyed this read very much Paula, well penned my friend. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
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November 16, 2024 at 7:08 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Who Am I" write to be a well penned. Yes, many different phases in life as we age.  Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.............
George Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 8:59 PM
This is such a lovely poem, dear Paula. With age, one should continue to grow. When you try to be a better person each day, you will end up as a beautiful human being. All the Best!
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November 16, 2024 at 7:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for All the Best. Glad you found my "Who Am I" write to be a lovely poem. Yes, we need to try to be a better person each day. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 11:33 AM
And you do give us a smile! Beyond middle years we start to feel the pull toward those Senior years…the slow down. Hugs ~ Kim
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November 16, 2024 at 6:58 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Who Am I" write. Think young/stay young/enjoy life/be thankful. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.............
Narain Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 10:53 AM
Great poem Paula. you evoke hope in senior like me. Keep on penning.
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November 16, 2024 at 6:55 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Who Am I" write to be a Great poem. Age is only a number. I turn 25 next year. Hahaha!!! Think young/stay young/enjoy life/be thankful. Words I live by... Have a blessed day writing away.............
Read Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 8:13 AM
Hi Paula I'm a senior but I'm still dreaming, thank you for making me smile. God bless.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 8:24 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Who Am I" write. Yes, always dream big. Big dreams are what life is all about. I love to give out smiles... Have a blessed day writing away............
Rodgers Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 4:44 AM
Dear Paula, I love how your words radiate wisdom and contentment, beautifully capturing the essence of personal growth in middle age. Your commitment to giving and spreading joy through your writing is truly inspiring, reflecting a life well-lived and a heart full of generosity. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 8:21 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Your very kind words have touched my heart. Thanks... Glad you enjoyed reading my "Who Am I" write. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Andresen Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 1:41 AM
- A wonderful poem about you, Paula :) - Best wishes for the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 8:17 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found my "Who Am I" write to be A wonderful poem. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.............
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 9:27 PM
Really? My dreams are bigger than ever. Senor Gershon
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November 14, 2024 at 8:15 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Who Am I" write. Oh yes, dream big, then bigger, then even bigger. Big dreams are what life is made of.... Have a blessed day writing away.............
Tor Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 7:41 PM
Wonderful words to tell us how you feel of sharing your lovely Poetry Paula thanks for sharing...
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November 14, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Who Am I" write to be lovely Poetry. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Rolland Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 7:20 PM
a,d i love to read you, so nice a,d friendly poem, enjoyed
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November 14, 2024 at 8:11 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Who Am I" write. It is great to hear you love to read my writes. I love it when my readers enjoy my work. You have made my day a happy one. Thanks...  Have a blessed day writing away.............
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November 13, 2024 at 5:48 PM
You are a joy to the world Paula, a personality that shines like a diamond in the sky…
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November 14, 2024 at 8:07 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Who Am I" write. Your wonderful words put a smile on my heart. Thanks... Have a blessed day writing away.............
Crandall Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 3:29 PM
Very nice positive poem Paula, sounds like a bright future!
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November 14, 2024 at 8:06 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Who Am I" write to be a Very nice positive poem. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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November 13, 2024 at 1:48 PM
Who Am I ~Date Written:11/13/2024~Written By Human Poet
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