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Written - 12th November 2024
Who am I Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France

Just who am I I have never known the answer It's said children should be seen and not heard Those words are a nonsense Children really need to talk and be talked to To learn how to behave and engage with others Feeling truly loved and content I guess you will see why, I don't know who am I. It’s a long road To where one is wishing to be Happy in mind, very loving and kind I hope I’m seen that way Though I’m not perfect, have erred occasionally I pray to become the best I can be, always With generosity of heart So the woman - who am I - does become - that’s me.

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FJ Thomas

Date: 2/24/2025 8:06:00 PM

I grew up in the 'children should be seen only' period. It does take a while for us become someone of our own doesn't it :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/24/2025 8:22:00 PM

It certainly does, it’s the forgiving that’s easy, the forgetting that’s hard. Thank you FJ… Beryl

Constance La France

Date: 12/26/2024 10:15:00 AM

Beryl, congratulations on your win in my Who Am I Contest, wonderfully penned, well done, Constance

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/26/2024 3:12:00 PM

Thank you very much Constance, I am delighted with the placement… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/12/2024 8:29:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Great last line... Have a wonderful day with your win...........

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/13/2024 5:19:00 PM

Thank you Paula, I’m delighted with the placement… Beryl

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/15/2024 1:44:00 PM

Very sweet! None of us get thatat this very moment we are already perfect as is. Whether it is poetry …or how we look.. We questionand doubt…that is so sad!. Or jump on the scale that drives some, mad. Your mind will aiways tell you something is amiss. Let it talk to you! Then tell it “Thank you for sharing!” What would your life be like….if you accepted yourself fully….or me? Good luck in the contest, Pangie xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/21/2024 7:56:00 PM

Dear Pangie, life would be wonderful with nothing amiss, but then life is a mixture of good and bad, happy or sad. As the song says, Lord for my sake, teach me to take one day at a time… Beryl x

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/15/2024 1:48:00 AM

Great advice and resolution to one's soul. We often forget these important points.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/21/2024 7:48:00 PM

So we do, thank you Victor, very much appreciated… Poet pal Bel

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/14/2024 4:39:00 AM

Dear Beryl, So wonderful how you unveiled the profound impact of childhood silencing. Your journey of self-discovery and growth shines through, inspiring others to embrace their authentic selves. Your poem beautifully captures the essence of becoming - a testament to your resilience and wisdom. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/14/2024 12:12:00 PM

Dear Daniel, thank you for your understanding, we don’t know what goes on in someone else’s mind, or what they have had to face in their lives. God says we should forgive seventy times seven, that’s four hundred and ninety steps towards heaven, and I do… Blessings to you dear friend… Beryl

David Crandall

Date: 11/13/2024 3:33:00 PM

You seem like a very nice lady to me Beryl - but who would want to be perfect!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/14/2024 12:06:00 PM

Thank you David, we can’t be perfect all of the time, but most of the time should do… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/13/2024 2:28:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Have a blessed day................

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/14/2024 12:05:00 PM

Hi Paula, I have read your poem on the same subject and have commented on your excellent write. Enjoy a blessed day too… Beryl

John Read

Date: 11/13/2024 8:51:00 AM

Hi sister Beryl, we are a part of the old school, brought up respecting our elders, good luck in the contest. Xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/14/2024 12:01:00 PM

So we are brother John, I think you’ll agree, respect has to be gained not ordered… Sis Beryl

Michael Tor

Date: 11/13/2024 3:18:00 AM

Such a personal truth you've shared Beryl. Best wishes for the Contest...

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/14/2024 11:52:00 AM

Thank you Michael, as the song says, when you walk through a storm hold your head up high, best advice ever… Beryl

Karen Jones

Date: 11/12/2024 10:15:00 PM

I love your honesty and agree with Deb. You are because you aspire to be! Hugs good luck in the contest Beryl!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/14/2024 11:50:00 AM

Thank you Karen, I found the me I wanted to be eventually, though life wasn’t easy. If one finds it in their heart to make life better, then one can ride the stormy weather… Beryl

Deb M

Date: 11/12/2024 3:50:00 PM

Lovely poem Beryl! I think you have become that woman my friend! Debx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/12/2024 7:46:00 PM

Thank you for that Deb, dear friend… Beryl x

Who am I

Written - 12th November 2024 Who am I Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Written - 12th November 2024
Who am I Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France