Who Am I

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“Made in God’s image, we are love and light ~ This truth is garnered by spherical sight” ~ quote by poet Flitting about from desire to desire Horizons shift and we feel incomplete Joy in permanence is what we aspire So we lay down our ego, at God’s feet Nodes within stir, when head and heart concur Our emptiness invokes bliss magnetism Boundaries between form and space then blur Currents sublime ignite mind-body prism God indwells this feeble form we adorn Seeing clearly, boundless is our delight Identity shorn, we’re here now reborn We behold our true Self as living light Oh weary hermit, know God alone is ~ We’re as He; existence, consciousness, bliss 18-May-2023 __________ Sonnet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sotto Poet

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/15/2023 12:56:00 PM

"So we lay down our ego at God's feet." The ultimate, conscious choice of the human heart and soul Seeker. You go straight to the eternal crux of mankind to find those moments of oneness and wholeness with our pure Creator. Congratulations on your win. This is an awesome sonnet. Blessings to you.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/15/2023 6:42:00 PM

Thank you, dear Sam ~ your encouraging words uplift my spirit! So happy you enjoyed, God bless

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/12/2023 10:59:00 AM

This piece is truly remarkable and commands great power, US. I extend my warmest congratulations for your well-deserved Win.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/12/2023 7:17:00 PM

Thank you, SP, for hosting and for the recognition!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/17/2023 9:28:00 PM

Satchitananda or existence-consciousness-bliss ~ https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Satcitananda?wprov=sfti1