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Who Am I

I am the sun and the moon at your feet step on me and you will receive my light hug me and you will receive my light I am sun and moon, I cannot be beat

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Charles Messina
Date: 1/16/2022 8:41:00 AM
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...and may they shine their light for evermore! Beautiful. M.R. Have a nice Sunday. ~Charlie
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Bill Baker
Date: 1/15/2022 3:56:00 PM
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They do light up my world, Mystic Rose. Thanks for sharing! Bill
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2022 6:05:00 PM
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Thank you Bill, I love both sun and moon, both part of God's amazing gifts
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/15/2022 12:47:00 PM
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Nice Imagery. Well done. God Bless, JB
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2022 6:05:00 PM
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Thank you Judy glad you enjoyed the read
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/15/2022 12:10:00 PM
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Very nice Who Am I
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2022 6:04:00 PM
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We are part of and particles of each, dear Robert, thanks for stopping b
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/15/2022 11:55:00 AM
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I like how you shine no matter what, keep it up!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2022 6:04:00 PM
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Thankyou dear Michelle, we all shine when we stand aside the sun and moon, even you xo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2022 7:21:00 AM
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Yes, you are. I like the voice of your poem my friend.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2022 6:04:00 PM
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Thankyou Vijay, If you like the voice then you must like God's creative energy gifts, thankyou for stopping by my friend
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/15/2022 7:19:00 AM
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Wow. The sun and the moon at your command. Well writ. Hugs.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2022 6:03:00 PM
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Yes it is always at our service the two luminaries of God's special creation, Thanks for reading Vic
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Anil Deo
Date: 1/15/2022 5:37:00 AM
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Great heights of simile, into Space & beyond to the Creator of Stars. Enjoyed this, as poetry is both seriously funny and funnily serious
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2022 6:02:00 PM
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No greater energy vehicle then the moon and sun, and our souls dear Anil

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