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Mystic Rose Rose

Who Am I

I am the sun and the moon at your feet 
step on me and you will receive my light 
hug me and you will receive my light 
I am sun and moon, I cannot be beat

Copyright © Mystic Rose Rose | Year Posted 2022

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Charles Messina

January 16, 2022 at 8:41 AM

...and may they shine their light for evermore! Beautiful. M.R. Have a nice Sunday. ~Charlie

January 15, 2022 at 3:56 PM

They do light up my world, Mystic Rose. Thanks for sharing! Bill

Mystic Rose Rose

January 15, 2022 at 6:05 PM

Thank you Bill, I love both sun and moon, both part of God's amazing gifts

January 15, 2022 at 12:47 PM

Nice Imagery. Well done. God Bless, JB

Mystic Rose Rose

January 15, 2022 at 6:05 PM

Thank you Judy glad you enjoyed the read

Robert Gorelick

January 15, 2022 at 12:10 PM

Very nice Who Am I

Mystic Rose Rose

January 15, 2022 at 6:04 PM

We are part of and particles of each, dear Robert, thanks for stopping b

Michelle Faulkner

January 15, 2022 at 11:55 AM

I like how you shine no matter what, keep it up!

Mystic Rose Rose

January 15, 2022 at 6:04 PM

Thankyou dear Michelle, we all shine when we stand aside the sun and moon, even you xo

January 15, 2022 at 7:21 AM

Yes, you are. I like the voice of your poem my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

January 15, 2022 at 6:04 PM

Thankyou Vijay, If you like the voice then you must like God's creative energy gifts, thankyou for stopping by my friend

Victor Buhagiar

January 15, 2022 at 7:19 AM

Wow. The sun and the moon at your command. Well writ. Hugs.

Mystic Rose Rose

January 15, 2022 at 6:03 PM

Yes it is always at our service the two luminaries of God's special creation, Thanks for reading Vic

January 15, 2022 at 5:37 AM

Great heights of simile, into Space & beyond to the Creator of Stars. Enjoyed this, as poetry is both seriously funny and funnily serious

Mystic Rose Rose

January 15, 2022 at 6:02 PM

No greater energy vehicle then the moon and sun, and our souls dear Anil

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