Who Am I

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Heart is at ease, yet mind wishes to know
Consciousness fulcrum, that keeps us aglow

We see around, sacred geometry
As our breath flows in continuity

Senses externalised, everything sized
Mysterious love touch, not realised

Scriptures aplenty but they all confound
How may origin, of our self be found

To discern the truth, we go in, within
Sensing stirrings joyous, of bliss therein

Ego rested, as thoughts become slower
We are still, so who then is the mover

There being no mind, we cannot rehearse
As awareness melds, with the universe 

At ease in void and manifestation
Flow of aliveness, our meditation 

Essence of presence, unbound and unstained
Swathed in love and light, that may not be named

It will suffice to know, God alone is
Felt within, as a rapturous bliss fizz

25-April-2021

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/25/2021 10:33:00 AM

There is much truth in this poem and certainly you expound your thoughts very well.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/25/2021 11:05:00 AM

Happy it resonates, Victor! :)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/25/2021 10:24:00 AM

...beautiful . I was enraptured in your worlds and emotions Unseeking Seeker. "There being no mind, we cannot rehearse as awareness melds, with the universe" So true. All the best, Susan :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/25/2021 11:04:00 AM

Thanks for your visit, Susan! Happy you enjoyed :)