Who

Who?

Where did I go
before I knew you;
Where was my refuge
when I couldn’t face the world,
when my mask slipped 
and I was exposed
in all my vulnerability;
Who comforted me;
Who lifted me up
when I lay on my face
defeated; 
Who took the tumbled pieces 
of my shattered mind
and laid them straight again;
Who cared when I was hurt
and loosened the bands 
that threatened to
crush me;
Who listened to me
and made allowances
for the times I said things
 I later regretted;
Who forgave me those things 
before I even asked,
and said
“I knew you didn’t mean it
the way it sounded;”
Who did all those things;
and when you’re gone
where will I go?

Jan 1978
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Joshua Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 3:16 PM
The moment you cherish and indispensable personality. Intriguing!
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August 16, 2017 at 2:24 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting. And I'm so glad for your nice words. Beverly Read
Harris Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Interesting. When I insert myself into this poem it makes me want to say. LIFE IS GREAT FANTASTIC INCREDIBLE AND AT TIMES UNBELIEVABLE.
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August 16, 2017 at 2:22 PM
So glad you read this and got such a feeling. Poetry is meant to evoke feelings and I'm glad this one did for you. Beverly Read
Sergi Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 2:48 PM
Absorb the love in both days good or bad. You will be forgiven if your heart is pure. I speak as one who has been married many many many years.
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August 16, 2017 at 2:21 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting. Sounds like you've had a lot of experience. Beverly Read
Nance Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 9:12 AM
I can relate, as often as we wonder who and why people are in our lives and how hard it would be without them. Good questions and thoughts are laced in your words.
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August 23, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Thank you for your kind comments.
Fleming Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 3:13 AM
Beautifully framed sentiments, Beverly! You are blessed to have such a person in your life. My best regards. :) john P.s A seven for love.
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August 23, 2016 at 11:51 AM
Thank you John. Such people are rare I know. Hope you have or have had someone like that in your life too.
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